cp_intrusion_a1
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Intrusion

by [MAGIC SURPRISE] Davekillerish

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Avatar chin made an annotation at 706 69 246 while standing at 1041 94 196 October 2015
blu seems to miss this a lot
Avatar Anreol made an annotation at -2615 12 100 while standing at -2523 -106 -89 October 2015
increase ceiling
Avatar tyler left feedback: October 2015
maybe the rock should plug the hole or something instead, because right now that room is weird and useless
Avatar H-land made an annotation at -5575 290 -376 while standing at -5585 394 -366 October 2015
This ledge is just tall enough to be annoying. Maybe if you were to lift the floor for spawn up like 16 or 24 units?
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -457 824 65 while standing at -663 932 200 October 2015
why does this room need to exist?
Avatar ODSP made an annotation at -620 -2023 116 while standing at -178 -2029 116 October 2015
random death pit that doesn't really fit here
Avatar tyler made an annotation at 856 346 151 while standing at 1407 1022 342 October 2015
blu needs a flank into this area. the upper route that goes against the spawn door isn't even half a route
Avatar LionelTabre left feedback: October 2015
make light have a source - such as a lamp.
Avatar Gangstahwezel made an annotation at 735 -2259 51 while standing at 988 -995 193 October 2015
this corridor seems too long and/or wide
Avatar chin left feedback: October 2015
blu needs a forward spawn or something to help them on their way to C, really easy to shut BLU down at B after the boulder
Avatar \m/ Cyfun made an annotation at -371 604 71 while standing at -700 1085 124 October 2015
this would be a good place for a forward blu spawn
Avatar Melvineer left feedback: October 2015
blu needs a forward spawn after capturing B. Also, BLU respawn times are long at 13 seconds.
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -2670 -989 6 while standing at -2713 -312 -92 October 2015
Light's are too bright, consider using spotlights instead (valve does)
Avatar tyler made an annotation at -178 856 130 while standing at -696 755 202 October 2015
this dead end sucks
Avatar ODSP left feedback: October 2015
around the last is just long corridors which can lead to iffy sightline problems
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -59 -865 129 while standing at -223 -1034 195 October 2015
why is this door here
Avatar tyler left feedback: October 2015
think about the teams equilibrium. where do they meet? without forward spawns or spawn time adjustments, you get stalemates
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at -1745 707 22 while standing at -1736 705 20 October 2015
dead end?
Avatar \m/ Cyfun made an annotation at -484 422 62 while standing at -685 738 229 October 2015
what is this room?
Avatar LionelTabre left feedback: October 2015
it needs to be more dynamic, maybe make B optional, and give a forward spawn for blu?
Avatar \m/ Cyfun made an annotation at 1171 1357 74 while standing at 1391 982 212 October 2015
capping C is very slow
Avatar tyler made an annotation at -2364 187 -105 while standing at -2469 103 -36 October 2015
what is this
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: October 2015
Could do with a forward spawn for Blue after capping B
Avatar breakbitch hardcore left feedback: October 2015
the thing when you cap B is the worse
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: October 2015
The... obstacle that kills players on B when it is capped is unfair.
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -2729 -194 -229 while standing at -2809 -59 -187 October 2015
Please clip this platform
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -3203 -936 -251 while standing at -763 -1230 84 October 2015
huge sightline
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -3102 -739 -169 while standing at -3030 -760 -170 October 2015
These windows may cause you problems with vis optimisation later on. I suggest removing them
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -3105 -308 -163 while standing at -3041 -271 -157 October 2015
These windows give Red too great an advantage for defending.
Avatar H-land left feedback: October 2015
Only flank to A is too sniperbaity
Avatar Gangstahwezel made an annotation at -1107 -1094 -129 while standing at -1007 -1074 -28 October 2015
small displacement error
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: October 2015
Red's sentry positions are too numerous and defensible at A
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -3650 701 -119 while standing at -3592 726 -58 October 2015
too dark
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at 1080 -824 1129 while standing at 1478 214 196 October 2015
Skybox is too high, can see over walls (and geometry is clipped)
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at 1302 174 1119 while standing at 1133 509 196 October 2015
Can jump up, visibility doesn't look too right
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at -4546 -647 -345 while standing at -4667 -661 -353 October 2015
missed texture
Avatar H-land made an annotation at -5405 -131 -264 while standing at -5400 -130 -267 October 2015
Doors clip floor when open
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -5243 99 -317 while standing at -4359 -1127 -340 October 2015
Easy to camp people in spawn.
Avatar Tuaam made an annotation at -4417 -320 -301 while standing at -4717 -362 -230 October 2015
purple textures?
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at 921 711 7 while standing at 1431 566 129 October 2015
Too dark here
Avatar 'Rito left feedback: October 2015
minute and a half setup is too long. 1 minute 10 max, 60s preferable
Avatar Anreol made an annotation at 439 1762 352 while standing at 445 1775 388 October 2015
why I spawned here and all the other team down there
Avatar H-land made an annotation at 488 861 337 while standing at 397 863 388 October 2015
Nobuild on this balcony does not seem natural or fair.
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at 1132 1647 209 while standing at 919 1534 196 October 2015
Respawn room is too dark, can't see it when retreating
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at 1037 1321 112 while standing at 1211 1212 139 October 2015
Must crouch jump to get back up. Is annoying
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at -751 606 182 while standing at -508 1036 123 October 2015
hm what is this room for
Avatar H-land made an annotation at 1178 1521 198 while standing at 1180 1512 196 October 2015
Make this smaller or clear or something so we can see the point
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -5982 643 -425 while standing at -4602 305 -187 October 2015
Spawn feels too large and empyty
Avatar breakbitch hardcore made an annotation at -817 -884 -143 while standing at -768 -853 -108 October 2015
clip this properly
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -4947 -1059 -407 while standing at -4985 -1082 -363 October 2015
door clips
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -489 -407 54 while standing at -489 -767 118 October 2015
Why is there a boulder here. Interesting mechanic, don't see why it fits heere
Avatar Anreol made an annotation at -2346 264 -102 while standing at -2377 367 -43 October 2015
what the heck is this
Avatar H-land left feedback: October 2015
The path to BLU's spawn from RED is confusing and I have no idea where they're coming from. Surely, it could be simplified?
Avatar breakbitch hardcore made an annotation at -492 -1621 52 while standing at -509 -1303 93 October 2015
these corridors are kind of bland in design
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -687 -735 -12 while standing at -1453 -988 223 October 2015
why are rocks inside?
Avatar Tuaam left feedback: October 2015
that AAAAH! sound people make when falling is going to annoy me everey time.
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: October 2015
Please use setup gates in blu spawn so we can see outside during setup
Avatar Anreol made an annotation at -5396 -273 -315 while standing at -5449 -332 -267 October 2015
nice door
Avatar H-land made an annotation at -1065 -886 -164 while standing at -946 -938 -108 October 2015
More smaller metal around here, please.
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at -34 -795 142 while standing at -223 -582 188 October 2015
increase door speed
Avatar ODSP left feedback: October 2015
console error spam for materials
Avatar chin made an annotation at -544 1181 127 while standing at -500 328 123 October 2015
dead end?
Avatar Anreol left feedback: October 2015
nice default specator camera
Avatar LionelTabre made an annotation at 1224 1712 163 while standing at 1223 1796 196 October 2015
Too dark here