pl_moondust_b4-1
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Moondust

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Avatar phi made an annotation at -1511 5278 591 while standing at -1536 5186 785 July 2015
sightline from here over d is ridiculous
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 1233 -1298 643 while standing at 959 -3631 1117 July 2015
Sniper sightlines
Avatar chin made an annotation at -749 3136 658 while standing at -908 323 832 July 2015
nasty sightline that cuts off blu's push
Avatar phi made an annotation at -1704 2165 684 while standing at -1666 2051 859 July 2015
can stand here and snipe all the way across c
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -1437 -1484 2092 while standing at -1260 1084 1355 July 2015
On a space station would there really be a Mann Co sign? It's not exactly public access
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
my only complaint right now is the big biodome area, it's too open
Avatar phi made an annotation at 2383 2237 635 while standing at 2431 2405 756 July 2015
sightlines across this whole area are way too large, same with B
Avatar chin made an annotation at -432 4632 807 while standing at -104 4177 900 July 2015
this room is mostly wasted space, I'd recommend scrapping it and tightening it up to focus more around the cart path
Avatar re1wind made an annotation at -2763 -2476 213 while standing at -2727 -2469 268 July 2015
invisible wall
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Heck, clip everywear more
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
attacking last seemed a bit too easy, the sniper shightlines there were too long?, and the shape was a bit confusing, fps
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at -2998 -2458 230 while standing at -2571 -2852 374 July 2015
Clip here more.
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at -604 1933 1517 while standing at -347 2288 1548 July 2015
weird things going on with the reflections here
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
Mannhattan capture danger sound is heard when last is capped. Seems a bit redundant.
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 1933 162 541 while standing at 1509 3059 1027 July 2015
INSANE sniper sightline
Avatar chin made an annotation at -786 3828 579 while standing at -757 3614 723 July 2015
these track props confused me while pushing the cart, I had no idea which way the cart was going to go
Avatar phi made an annotation at 987 -3552 985 while standing at 993 -3630 1070 July 2015
no map should ever have sightlines and heights this high, ever
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
not every map has to be the same
Avatar Turbo Lover made an annotation at -1377 5649 698 while standing at -1337 -1263 844 July 2015
dear god this sightline
Avatar I.H.N.N made an annotation at 13 -1313 584 while standing at -576 -1407 547 July 2015
the first time when I'm playing this map on the last point, I was little confused. but then not anymore
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
it might be worth honestly remaking last, would be faster and might look cleaner than to balance what it is at the moment
Avatar Taco Doge made an annotation at 306 1434 373 while standing at 360 1238 527 July 2015
Very nice flank rout but hard to tell if you can stand on it.
Avatar Depre left feedback: July 2015
Many of the indoor areas are very maze-like and often go ignored by both teams.
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -1409 -1301 577 while standing at -1362 -1215 684 July 2015
why does the bomb randomly dissapear when the final point is captured?
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
and fun
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Would look better as a SFM map
Avatar chin made an annotation at -1076 -1175 578 while standing at -1237 -988 690 July 2015
this door feels very campable when blu are pushing last, maybe get rid of it and move the exit somewhere a little more safe
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
You have mixed ordinary TF2 props in with the spacey feel and it lessens the
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
As much as people are asking you to make the map less complicated I think it's one of the things that make it stand out
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
last was really confusing to walk around, all the routes of it i mean
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 1513 652 361 while standing at 965 692 563 July 2015
hard to walk here
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
If this is Cave Johnson's Mine, then why are there no Portal assets?
Avatar Depre left feedback: July 2015
Aesthetically, the map looks great, but many of the gameplay areas are needlessly massive.
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
I think just gutting the vents on first would be fine tbh
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -267 3165 1178 while standing at -322 2706 1091 July 2015
Can't see this font being used in signs. Looks unprofessional
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at -1919 1264 492 while standing at -2166 1423 601 July 2015
another area that isn't really being used. I'd cut it off
Avatar Random Ghost made an annotation at -1026 2708 492 while standing at -1015 2695 516 July 2015
can get stuck here
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
Detailing is mostly nice.
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
Does seem rather easy to get lost
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at 1376 3135 933 while standing at 1016 3037 993 July 2015
this whole area is too far away from the battlements and not really being used
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Try using the Lunary Proppack for the crates. They fit the theme more. I belive they are in the Bulletcrops pack.
Avatar Taco Doge made an annotation at 600 1846 544 while standing at 761 1848 580 July 2015
What is this room
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Are you a Sniper Main? Because this map is only good for Sniper
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at 3018 1734 596 while standing at 1326 288 760 July 2015
I like the look of C details
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at 176 -1805 -185 while standing at 200 -1600 -158 July 2015
vent system is totally unnecessary
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Sightlines? Mire like Shite-Lines
Avatar Taco Doge left feedback: July 2015
VEry out of place props
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap made an annotation at -384 -4221 87 while standing at -342 -4220 132 July 2015
Climbable ladders in TF2 are really awkward, you should probably install some kind of ramp here instead
Avatar Depre made an annotation at 17 -1298 445 while standing at -30 -1308 456 July 2015
This arrow points nowhere
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at 1421 -3004 88 while standing at -1262 -2778 132 July 2015
this area is a sniper wonderland
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at -1249 -1192 604 while standing at -1105 -1185 620 July 2015
maybe instead of this sign, make that door blocked at the start?
Avatar Taco Doge left feedback: July 2015
Easy to get lost as defender and there are many useless ooms but i like the medic heavy easter end and the vents area
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
Unused spaces aren't a bad thing in my opinion, they're opportunities for fun tactics
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Too many areas to go. Wasted Map space.
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at -468 -3776 80 while standing at -447 -3321 324 July 2015
when im standing here as RED I dont know where to look, where does blue come out? needs to be easy to tell
Avatar Gadget left feedback: July 2015
map would work well for mvm
Avatar re1wind left feedback: July 2015
or rather, too many spaces, period.
Avatar Jetamo left feedback: July 2015
cont- gameplay of the map. Someone's suggestion of splitting the map into two stages might work well
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Too many spaces the go unused.
Avatar Jetamo left feedback: July 2015
Technically and aesthetically wise, I really like this map. However, it sort of feels lacking in regards to the actual-cont
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -1909 -616 1187 while standing at -1910 -615 1189 July 2015
this is a great sentry spot... please nurf it
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
I, for one, really appreciate what you're doing in terms of the layout of this map. It feels like a proper moonbase
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at -1098 251 991 while standing at -819 244 1052 July 2015
where do i go
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Alert! The Final Control Point has been contested!
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
Announcer says 'last control point being captured' when blue touches cart after D
Avatar RubbishyUsername left feedback: July 2015
'alert, our final control point is being contested' every time blue touches the cart at E
Avatar Jetamo made an annotation at -220 4718 576 while standing at -256 3972 964 July 2015
What's the point of this room?
Avatar re1wind made an annotation at -507 219 939 while standing at -516 189 979 July 2015
oh god this stairwell.
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
kinda low fps looking into last from blue perspective
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at -1690 -368 557 while standing at -1762 -847 627 July 2015
Why is this area?
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at -1124 3711 649 while standing at -1549 706 828 July 2015
too much advantages for snipers with those long sight lines
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -1759 63 608 while standing at -1751 -945 620 July 2015
Arrows tell me to go down here but it's a dead end
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -1890 -616 842 while standing at -1918 -649 1196 July 2015
are you suppost to be on this?
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at -484 2301 705 while standing at -392 2311 723 July 2015
these crates totally mask that behind it is the next area for attackers to go
Avatar re1wind made an annotation at -1757 4414 623 while standing at -1661 4401 628 July 2015
unless this is used later, don't use doors usually used exclusively by players
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: July 2015
I love the the amount of free roaming you get, but its probably too much and will cause balance issues
Avatar re1wind left feedback: July 2015
i ask because it's huge and tons of props
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at -1067 3136 1135 while standing at -1162 3175 1188 July 2015
clip this area
Avatar re1wind made an annotation at -1420 4812 577 while standing at -1447 4900 628 July 2015
is this even an area the payload passes through?
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at 1474 2296 494 while standing at 1424 2060 500 July 2015
at this point, C, red was nowhere to be found defending this section?
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at -326 -1542 753 while standing at -315 -1630 804 July 2015
Glass texture not obvious
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at -553 -1668 738 while standing at -248 -1288 804 July 2015
Way too far into detailing here bud.
Avatar ::Egan:: left feedback: July 2015
-- but at the moment it was catching attackers by surprise a lot
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at 1396 -2326 695 while standing at 1417 -2268 739 July 2015
idk if you should let players on top of this structure. maybe it will be better when the room is smaller, but --
Avatar re1wind made an annotation at -727 2271 1131 while standing at -852 2905 1188 July 2015
large outdoor area. seems to encourage soldier/demo/sniper/scout
Avatar Donut the Vikingchap left feedback: July 2015
I really like the feel of this map
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at 2436 -985 991 while standing at 2343 -1279 459 July 2015
needs some type of particle so it looks like it acctuly floating midair
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at 409 93 693 while standing at 626 26 736 July 2015
A tab too dark here.
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at 145 -727 776 while standing at 180 -687 736 July 2015
These lights props do not need to be solid. Non-solid static props reduce collision data file size
Avatar Gadget left feedback: July 2015
I like all the creative ideas but overall it's too large with too many paths
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at 1506 -1228 73 while standing at 1424 -1130 103 July 2015
What? Im confused.
Avatar SnickerPuffs left feedback: July 2015
Getting a clusterfuck vibe
Avatar Aksel made an annotation at 1148 -2179 725 while standing at 1172 -2124 772 July 2015
need to make this look like glass
Avatar re1wind left feedback: July 2015
i don't think the payload flows well.
Avatar Turbo Lover made an annotation at 1492 -1136 138 while standing at 969 -1149 122 July 2015
these corridors are REALLY cramped, widen them a bit
Avatar Melvineer made an annotation at -306 -4195 -39 while standing at -712 -4122 -59 July 2015
prefer not to have ladders
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at 2281 -2388 396 while standing at 2291 -2430 429 July 2015
halflife material
Avatar RubbishyUsername left feedback: July 2015
indicate for me where blue's initial spawn exits are for A - I set up in the wrong direction as engie
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -432 -4183 -106 while standing at -705 -4129 139 July 2015
i like the working ladders
Avatar ::Egan:: made an annotation at -2410 -4193 193 while standing at -2691 -4414 255 July 2015
fps in spawn is bad
Avatar Gadget made an annotation at 1470 435 444 while standing at 1359 522 470 July 2015
cars on the moon?
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at -687 -5114 178 while standing at -1388 -5000 179 July 2015
this route is hard to see when coming from spawn
Avatar phi left feedback: July 2015
that wall that prevents red from getting into the initial area with the cart doesn't encourage defense
Avatar SnickerPuffs made an annotation at -2934 -3907 231 while standing at -3079 -4280 252 July 2015
nice use of Asteroid props!
Avatar ⛐ worMatty left feedback: July 2015
Framerate stutters a bit while walking around in various places outside
Avatar Aksel left feedback: July 2015
Need overlays under health and ammo kits
Avatar ⛐ worMatty made an annotation at 340 2391 600 while standing at 258 2569 610 July 2015
Can't walk up this displacement
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -2303 -4204 204 while standing at -2405 -4233 262 July 2015
oh its here.
Avatar Jetamo made an annotation at -2860 -4117 267 while standing at -2937 -4296 262 July 2015
DEAR GOD STOP THE DINGING
Avatar Xandoshi222 made an annotation at -2810 -4657 206 while standing at -2617 -4601 262 July 2015
wheres the resupply cabenet?