cp_backwash_b2
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Backwash

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Avatar jeff alfredo made an annotation at -1339 -765 -85 while standing at -773 -715 115 April 2018
this flank favours the team that holds the the mid alot
Avatar jeff alfredo left feedback: April 2018
retaking mid is very very hard, the team with it spawns this close
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 1072 1711 150 while standing at 933 1784 141 April 2018
being forced around this pillar because of clipping feels super awkward and is a bit of overly agressive clipping
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 2265 2634 66 while standing at 2239 2565 139 April 2018
odd detail choice
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
and it'll turn out very nice
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
very very promising map tho! got so much better from the early versions. keep at it, optimise it some
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 1165 2740 95 while standing at 1173 2755 129 April 2018
more seams?
Avatar evasive species left feedback: April 2018
this map is lagging my game a bit
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
as it stands now if you jump high on one team's last point, the other one renders. which doesn't help
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 1772 1685 261 while standing at 1879 1704 243 April 2018
weird lighting on this pipe. maybe use per-vertex lighting if you arent?
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
basically it needs division of areas via skybox brushes to help optimisation. it'll help so much
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 942 2076 152 while standing at 1012 2075 169 April 2018
maybe instead of having the entire door be diagonal, make it a displacement that bends up at the box?
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| left feedback: April 2018
You still have dev textures
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -736 -1008 438 while standing at -929 -997 576 April 2018
one across here linking the ones on the slatted roof to the edge of the skybox
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 1285 -210 229 while standing at 1037 -233 605 April 2018
one across this building...
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 957 237 358 while standing at 907 118 470 April 2018
a couple along here...
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 1144 2915 89 while standing at 1140 2951 129 April 2018
this random block of stone down here looks weird
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
> to break up the areas optimization wise
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 1249 1467 540 while standing at 1068 1423 626 April 2018
you need better optimization, if i go up really high on mid i can see last, which is bad - place more skybox textures >
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 292 478 429 while standing at 220 231 412 April 2018
then you could see it from the front
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 572 982 478 while standing at 564 871 687 April 2018
same here, although pulling this structure out across the length of the building would look even cooler
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 1153 1341 358 while standing at 980 1152 565 April 2018
good silouhetting here
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| made an annotation at 1295 156 12 while standing at 1096 133 74 April 2018
Really thick beams
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 1400 1051 338 while standing at 1353 805 424 April 2018
same roof texture issue, would look better not being the same as the walls
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 902 978 212 while standing at 822 853 232 April 2018
roof is textured oddly, should use a different sheet metal, also clips through post
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 159 198 37 while standing at 250 182 79 April 2018
wood bridge not being supported on one side of the two planks
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at -25 23 -71 while standing at -109 7 170 April 2018
where is this light coming from?
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -791 193 -238 while standing at -791 279 -156 April 2018
very tiny space that people squeeze through, maybe move the rock away a little?
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| made an annotation at -1193 -1508 95 while standing at -1226 -1456 221 April 2018
Clip this area so knockback doesn't get you caught on the doorframe or fence any
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -942 -2120 135 while standing at -1068 -2135 148 April 2018
same shutter issue here, they dont really do this irl this much
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -1006 -1351 -43 while standing at -934 -1241 37 April 2018
very thick handrail
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -894 -1537 194 while standing at -1010 -1534 171 April 2018
shutter doors dont do this even when disturbed
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -2401 -1110 46 while standing at -2165 -1052 167 April 2018
very odd fence. looks weird. consider blocking with different, smaller props
Avatar Maria made an annotation at 534 -1153 -89 while standing at 479 -1047 -59 April 2018
no resupply lockers
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at -1479 -2936 -38 while standing at -1304 -2863 132 April 2018
the lighting on these lights is odd.
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| made an annotation at -1033 -1714 82 while standing at -1107 -2191 132 April 2018
Clip these beams
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -2585 -1251 -238 while standing at -2526 -1332 -195 April 2018
accidental water texture on this slope
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| made an annotation at -1015 -3013 121 while standing at -1016 -3034 132 April 2018
Displacement not sewn
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) left feedback: April 2018
definitely edit the skybox to remove the pure white, i think there's a fix on tf2m somewhere
Avatar evasive species left feedback: April 2018
i can see the bottom of the skybox all the time
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at -1569 -3980 190 while standing at -1567 -3983 188 April 2018
cute, but its sorta... tiny. i get you dont want full detail yet, but you could add cliffs or somethin
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -2241 263 -221 while standing at -2133 231 -154 April 2018
possibly make this water a darker colour? feels unnaturally bright for a night map, looks like a daytime sky
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -1359 108 -66 while standing at -1330 88 -89 April 2018
texture alignment is wrong
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -1212 248 -174 while standing at -1309 158 -139 April 2018
building looks great except for this weird post, maybe give it some trims like the rest
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at 1842 3763 722 while standing at 2185 3765 758 April 2018
so thin, too thin
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -2058 -929 68 while standing at -2118 -708 146 April 2018
this building is a bit janky, the entrances and unsupported rooves look weird
Avatar vulturefat (no sound) made an annotation at -1552 -2991 53 while standing at -1410 -3096 351 April 2018
glad you're making this point outdoors, it was dreary in alpha
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at -1911 -2139 -82 while standing at -1834 -2015 -23 April 2018
i can see a few pixels where theres nodraw
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| left feedback: April 2018
Make it to where we can't see the bottom of the skybox
Avatar evasive species made an annotation at 1023 361 -168 while standing at 1046 336 -144 April 2018
huge seam!
Avatar evasive species left feedback: April 2018
did you compile cubemaps? if not, you should. it stops reflective surfaces from looking weird