cp_office_a13
45 Comments
 
33/0/67 Round Win % (3 rounds) (Click for more information)

Office

by Unknown

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Avatar chemelia made an annotation at 10235 6582 6898 while standing at 10280 6600 7031 May 2018
only 2 routes through here and they're both narrow ramps. generally you want 3 or so and there should be variation btwn em
Avatar Startacker! left feedback: May 2018
STAGE 3 B - I'm doing a whole lot of walking only to get bumped by an explosive and fall off the building
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 9701 5341 6458 while standing at 9553 5341 6294 May 2018
what.... is this?
Avatar Onra77 left feedback: May 2018
last stage is very overscaled
Avatar Startacker! left feedback: May 2018
STAGE 3 A - That cap point is really painful to capture as red can just throw whatever they have downwards
Avatar chemelia left feedback: May 2018
no func_respawnroom in blue stage 3 spawn - die when switching classes
Avatar blamo made an annotation at 10261 4537 6474 while standing at 10082 4382 6514 May 2018
lighting so dark, that you cant tell teams apart here
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 9899 4686 6459 while standing at 9990 4596 6514 May 2018
this room is incredibly dark and hard to tell which team a player is on
Avatar Zombie812 left feedback: May 2018
teams*
Avatar Zombie812 left feedback: May 2018
red and blue colored rooms make it hard to distinguish classes
Avatar Onra77 made an annotation at 9543 5966 6338 while standing at 9402 5801 6294 May 2018
beam out of this texture doesn't look right
Avatar Zombie812 made an annotation at 9700 4401 6258 while standing at 9544 4094 6301 May 2018
small spawn, one krit sticky kills us allll
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 9991 4903 7080 while standing at 10150 4792 6998 May 2018
why is this dish here? It can't even point at the sky
Avatar chemelia left feedback: May 2018
horizontal symmetry is generally not good - makes things a bit boring
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 9547 4259 6258 while standing at 10021 4330 6294 May 2018
woah this spawn is super cramped
Avatar erk left feedback: May 2018
I keep getting stuck on all these chairs
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 9100 -11 4356 while standing at 8557 -963 3880 May 2018
it is really hard to push upwards through these stairs
Avatar chemelia made an annotation at 9340 -864 4431 while standing at 9362 -811 4478 May 2018
empty room?
Avatar Medium Boss made an annotation at 8743 -280 4416 while standing at 9065 -227 4539 May 2018
seperate these entrances perhaps, easy for defenders to watch both easily
Avatar chemelia made an annotation at 8669 -1259 3833 while standing at 8594 -1198 3909 May 2018
this area is a bit dull, and it being indoors doesn't help things... if it's gonna be flat, a large atrium would be better
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 9275 -1507 4458 while standing at 9200 -1436 4485 May 2018
this is gonna be waaaaaaay too many model triangles to waste on something that doesn't really have any point to it
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 8801 -2005 3854 while standing at 8762 -2018 3880 May 2018
this door is sticking out into blu spawn
Avatar blamo left feedback: May 2018
actually take my last comment and apply it to first stage only, unless second and third end up being flawed as well
Avatar chemelia made an annotation at 8630 -1680 3828 while standing at 8536 -1661 3880 May 2018
kit so close to spawn is usually not good
Avatar Onra77 made an annotation at 8543 -3343 4296 while standing at 8620 -2470 4474 May 2018
this cord is a pink and black texture
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 9195 -1807 4429 while standing at 9517 -1857 4511 May 2018
these ropes are pink and black for me
Avatar Onra77 made an annotation at 8219 12 4964 while standing at 8307 -320 4914 May 2018
this wall is kind of empty
Avatar blamo left feedback: May 2018
frustrated by the seemingly amature and sorta mindless quality of your creative choices here
Avatar Defcon left feedback: May 2018
i still think your best option is to compare this to any official map and try to identify what those maps do that you don't
Avatar blamo left feedback: May 2018
I would agree with the notion that the whole layout of this map's stages need to be fully reworked. As I just end up being
Avatar Roll made an annotation at 2233 5482 1308 while standing at 1436 1774 1411 May 2018
longass sightline to b
Avatar Medium Boss made an annotation at 1481 3619 606 while standing at 1330 3721 633 May 2018
can get out of the map through here easily
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 2842 4023 1110 while standing at 2854 3983 1147 May 2018
got stuck here
Avatar Defcon left feedback: May 2018
this map is not going to improve if you don't start making huge changes
Avatar Startacker! left feedback: May 2018
Stage 1 B is incredibly hard to get to as Blu since there's really only one way to get to it
Avatar norfolk made an annotation at 2357 4085 1131 while standing at 2387 4189 1163 May 2018
this pile is too uneven to easily get onto. maybe reshape it
Avatar Onra77 made an annotation at 1793 964 715 while standing at 1487 790 740 May 2018
some security warning please
Avatar Defcon left feedback: May 2018
you haven't tried to address the fundamental issue of this map being a flat hallway filled with props
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 2196 3046 1282 while standing at 2117 3103 1312 May 2018
oh this glass breaks, why have it here then?
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 2158 2980 1333 while standing at 2157 2981 1331 May 2018
I can barely see the glass here
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 2312 1620 1127 while standing at 2379 1499 1153 May 2018
it's really awkward to get up to here without jumping, it also looks like it's falling apart
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 2656 3988 1126 while standing at 2695 4268 1162 May 2018
this approach to last seems waaay too narrow for an entire team
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 2269 776 1178 while standing at 2232 594 1156 May 2018
this is cool
Avatar x6herbius made an annotation at 2571 4911 1308 while standing at 2589 4934 1348 May 2018
z-fighting here
Avatar Startacker! made an annotation at 3825 -324 1171 while standing at 3812 -172 1246 May 2018
HL2 props are really weird