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Zaevie made an annotation at -1115 7998 603 while standing at 56 3872 -32 8 hours ago

This view is probably the best looking part of the skybox.

Defcon made an annotation at 612 3732 -325 while standing at 552 3295 -255 8 hours ago

also don't feel like this is the kind of place you'd find chainlink fences

Defcon made an annotation at -514 4151 -358 while standing at -712 3800 -147 8 hours ago

broken down wooden sheds seem out of place next to the pool of this luxury villa

Zaevie left feedback: 8 hours ago

You even use recoloured versions of that same concrete texture as well. I feel like the map lacks texture variety.

JP made an annotation at 428 3892 -442 while standing at -1182 2857 -29 8 hours ago

engineer can have one midly good spot that doesnt even see the point. no point in nobuilding this area just for one spy

chomp made an annotation at -218 -2860 -483 while standing at -1655 -2547 -448 8 hours ago

Very boring blu spawn

Zaevie made an annotation at -1517 -1546 -122 while standing at -1379 -1547 -114 8 hours ago

This is the texture I'm talking about btw. It's everywhere. Interiors, exteriors. Walls, windowsills. It's too samey.

Defcon left feedback: 8 hours ago

feel like the pool should be more ornate. more fountains, sculptures, decorative tiles, etc

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

I am confused if this is supposed to be fancy or not

Defcon left feedback: 8 hours ago

you could probably just remove water from the upper pool entirely. would make more sense with the control point there

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -475 -631 -117 while standing at -506 -646 -115 8 hours ago

how did they get this heavy pallet of barrels inside this house's hallway

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

I am not certain what part of the world this map is supposed to be in. Try to add some more hints in the map

Defcon made an annotation at -1398 1240 183 while standing at -1470 631 -483 8 hours ago

mismatched windows look very strange. I'd look at more reference for this style of architecture to inform the detailing

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

i think the map could use some more displacement floors

Strong Opponent made an annotation at 1241 5662 -528 while standing at 853 4511 -187 8 hours ago

this out of bounds area is not very intersting to look at

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -857 2312 -115 while standing at -947 2241 -106 8 hours ago

baseboards here are as tall as a person.

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -43 1918 -326 while standing at -20 1642 -261 8 hours ago

this table is weirdly short. I'd expect it to wrap around more

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

Also make sure your baseboards are consistently sized throughout the map

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

anywhere that you have the mann manor baseboards, make sure they have a square aspect ratio and trims.

Defcon made an annotation at -665 -2487 -319 while standing at -875 -2985 -475 8 hours ago

walls are pretty bare. could use more details to indicate what this building is

dexc34 made an annotation at -289 3860 -513 while standing at -90 3437 -298 8 hours ago

the mini pool can be turned into a fountain or water feature, cause atm it doesnt make that much sense

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

this yellow room doesn't make physical sense. Why would someone arrange their furniture like this?

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -190 3782 -537 while standing at -129 3752 -506 8 hours ago

I am not sure what this mini pool is supposed to be

Strong Opponent made an annotation at 134 3326 -647 while standing at -54 3516 -378 8 hours ago

pool has no ladder

Zaevie left feedback: 8 hours ago

Add forcerespawn for Red when A is captured so Red has time to set up on B.

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -1807 387 -542 while standing at -912 279 -294 8 hours ago

these railings could have more interesting geometry

dogburg left feedback: 8 hours ago

its impossible to defend B cause of no force respawns

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

the roofs could be more 3D. Add a ridge cap and maybe some dormers

Defcon made an annotation at -1606 3504 67 while standing at -1462 3788 -52 8 hours ago

try to light interiors so the ceiling is darker than the floor. it wil help draw players' eyes to important areas

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

compile the map with nightime enviornment light and look for areas outside that are too dark, to see where lights are missi

Defcon made an annotation at -2078 2978 -66 while standing at -2110 2887 -52 8 hours ago

glass is really thick

Zaevie left feedback: 8 hours ago

I think one this off about the detailing is this bland grey/beige concrete texture that's used on almost eeeeeeverything.

Defcon made an annotation at -1140 3678 -175 while standing at -909 3836 -260 8 hours ago

rotate roof trim texture

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -833 203 -333 while standing at -851 285 -278 8 hours ago

The concrete here is moldy and overgrown, right next to clean tiles. The floor imo should be cleaner

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -1165 1069 -439 while standing at -1186 996 -401 8 hours ago

this should be detailed as stairs

Zaevie made an annotation at -1626 1616 -337 while standing at -1605 1673 -326 8 hours ago

Why is this a one-way?

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -3333 867 -510 while standing at -3311 883 -490 8 hours ago

make this corner round. use arch tool

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -3105 798 -536 while standing at -2845 792 -476 8 hours ago

put a curb here

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -2453 1030 -538 while standing at -2298 1137 -459 8 hours ago

This road has no lane markings. If it's a driveway i'd expect it to be less cracked

Vaporwave cat Jade made an annotation at -2136 2428 -81 while standing at -2205 2473 -59 8 hours ago

this glass is way too clear, I tried to jump through it because it just looked like it was open

Defcon left feedback: 8 hours ago

I would at least use expensive water for the larger pool then give the upper pool a particle to hide cheap water or smthing

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -1248 669 -404 while standing at -1331 823 -353 8 hours ago

these conex containers look out of place

Defcon made an annotation at 263 2381 -421 while standing at 209 2349 -468 8 hours ago

beam texures aren't rotated

Defcon made an annotation at -420 2699 -336 while standing at -624 2486 -324 8 hours ago

texture repeating in the same spot on every plank looks strange

Strong Opponent made an annotation at 66 4038 -453 while standing at 80 4065 -444 8 hours ago

weird looking wood wall. I'd expect something nicer looking if I owned a mansion with a pool

target practice made an annotation at 195 3707 -536 while standing at 207 3705 -533 8 hours ago

love the pool

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -751 4029 -276 while standing at -759 3942 -260 8 hours ago

This palm tree doesnt look like it belongs here

Defcon made an annotation at -874 110 -472 while standing at -813 -77 -476 8 hours ago

layer cake concrete stripes are kinda strange

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -248 3730 -531 while standing at -709 3674 -200 8 hours ago

I see like 5 different floor textures in the same area. IRL it would just be one or two

Defcon made an annotation at -737 -2506 -532 while standing at -890 -2609 -468 8 hours ago

blu first spawn should use the standard orange setup gates that open once when the round starts

Strong Opponent made an annotation at -630 3406 -333 while standing at -724 3391 -324 8 hours ago

Obvious copy paste wood beam. These barriers would be better as a custom prop

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

virtually no point lights anywhere for interesting lighting. It's all just sunlight. Think about how this would lookatnight

Defcon made an annotation at -670 -2947 -189 while standing at -497 -2917 -468 8 hours ago

rotate wood textures to match the shape of the beam

Zaevie made an annotation at -698 -2492 -475 while standing at -722 -2643 -478 8 hours ago

Perhaps just us windowed-door model instead as a prop dynamic parented door?

Strong Opponent left feedback: 8 hours ago

detailing needs a lot of work before RC

gokrow made an annotation at -722 3069 -313 while standing at -1282 3360 -267 8 hours ago

nitpicky, but i feel like this could be a different texture. current one just looks off to me?

Defcon made an annotation at -1500 -2647 -390 while standing at -1158 -2825 -468 8 hours ago

this type of lamp shouldn't be directly illuminating the ceiling

target practice made an annotation at -1137 -2897 -538 while standing at -804 -2702 -475 9 hours ago

did play b16b of this map

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