koth_cannery_b10b
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Cannery

by Unknown

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Avatar Berry left feedback: July 2017
agree with name unfitting now?
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: July 2017
you may have detailing plans later for explaining the map lore but I think it will take mroe thought
Avatar the sneeze of 87 left feedback: July 2017
cities can be quite bright even at night
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: July 2017
the center area doesn't really have anything unique detailing wise to fit it? and doesnt shout 'cannery' to me
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: July 2017
the cubby, that is
Avatar Diva Dan made an annotation at 471 290 10 while standing at 560 872 1 July 2017
this area could be smaller
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: July 2017
if you have played that in OW
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: July 2017
the staircase outside of spawn to the left has an unintuititive shape, maybe have something similar to lijang night market
Avatar òwó made an annotation at 895 -735 7 while standing at 955 -901 4 July 2017
not a big fan of this fence as a blocker here, it feels so open and strange
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 662 1374 148 while standing at 694 1329 196 July 2017
add trims to concrete
Avatar Berry left feedback: July 2017
some little bits of grass (maybe trees?) in the mid area could look nice
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 470 411 185 while standing at 221 604 369 July 2017
flat roof looks weird -- functionally it wouldn't work
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 997 383 351 while standing at 1069 637 585 July 2017
messy out here
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -314 -1131 604 while standing at -211 -1002 590 July 2017
its also floating on one side
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -102 -1324 504 while standing at -239 -1516 544 July 2017
the above bridge building thingy looks weird -- odd texture, too simple (needs a roof, add windows?)
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -12 -1137 878 while standing at -147 -1071 933 July 2017
nodraw line
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -379 -2418 268 while standing at -397 -2574 254 July 2017
very bright bit of light here?
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -283 -2950 194 while standing at -44 -2827 321 July 2017
platform looks odd - I'd just keep with more concrete (metal platform looks out of place)
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -407 -3500 635 while standing at -408 -3328 670 July 2017
windows are misaligned around here
Avatar Berry left feedback: July 2017
your buildings look nice
Avatar Moth left feedback: July 2017
the point and spawns are really detailed, but the ways between them lack detail in comparison
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 356 -2313 73 while standing at 400 -2147 242 July 2017
the stairs clearly have the same texture on each face
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 11 -1255 66 while standing at -213 -1564 -15 July 2017
you could put some arches in the bridge to make it look nicer, and add railings?
Avatar Berry left feedback: July 2017
all doors need some form of frame tbh
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -983 -899 174 while standing at -797 -1035 317 July 2017
red props on blue side
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -927 -2234 96 while standing at -681 -2057 135 July 2017
weird textures
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -433 -1409 55 while standing at -385 -1433 81 July 2017
props in the wall
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 929 176 106 while standing at 791 96 127 July 2017
weird looking corner texture-wise, also room could use some more interest (not necessarily props)
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at -958 616 -5 while standing at -1127 624 1 July 2017
why is this random fence piece here
Avatar ඞSUSSYඞ left feedback: July 2017
the map feels pretty dark in areas like mid
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 1026 869 639 while standing at 952 832 725 July 2017
funky edge on this building
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 695 1308 220 while standing at 508 1496 197 July 2017
window needs a frame, texture also stretchy
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -509 2299 193 while standing at -318 2007 85 July 2017
fence could use more supports (displacements on the actual fencing to add some variation makes it look nice too)
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 309 3716 189 while standing at 128 3834 298 July 2017
this stair thingy makes no sense (maybe just add a metal stairway or sth?)
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 186 3770 121 while standing at -14 3301 243 July 2017
doors need frames
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -404 2631 63 while standing at -224 2777 94 July 2017
stairs could have more complexity (trims on the side maybe?)