koth_checkpoint_b7aaa
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Checkpoint

by Unknown

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Avatar DJ Sylveon #72Hours left feedback: May 2017
Not enough cones
Avatar Muddy made an annotation at 149 -339 26 while standing at 90 -109 36 May 2017
why is there a cactus apparently growing out of solid concrete?
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at 503 5150 324 while standing at 488 5168 335 May 2017
the inner mullions for this glass don't need to be so thick
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
think of the piston/orange glowy pits from portal 1
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at 784 3224 235 while standing at 761 3332 309 May 2017
you'd probably need a pit beneath this platform to make the hydraulics accessible
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1518 6778 111 while standing at 1814 6799 107 May 2017
wall seems boring, maybe something like a sign or a poster?
Avatar ArgonMarten made an annotation at 870 5823 245 while standing at 934 5869 308 May 2017
this doesn't make you slip
Avatar Muddy made an annotation at 74 156 40 while standing at 156 93 33 May 2017
should totally make this a physics prop
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at -968 -411 58 while standing at -1005 -262 106 May 2017
visible seams in the 3dsky
Avatar Pocket made an annotation at -497 7750 218 while standing at 727 7644 36 May 2017
I see ERRORs in the skybox
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2126 7993 28 while standing at 2133 7895 47 May 2017
might also want to use a door texture instead of this metal one
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2102 7891 52 while standing at 2156 7892 69 May 2017
I imagine this a boring job, maybe have something for the person sitting there to do? Like a tv, or some posters
Avatar erk made an annotation at 32 7607 -1 while standing at 29 7453 271 May 2017
dirt just suddenly stops after this fence, the truck would track dirt in and around the outside of the fence
Avatar erk made an annotation at 197 6841 -3 while standing at 196 6900 74 May 2017
disps clip through this wall
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at -1163 377 49 while standing at -1141 523 86 May 2017
this booth should probably be on the other side of the gate, unless you want to restrict trucks leaving instead of entering
Avatar erk made an annotation at -155 2680 492 while standing at -167 2524 516 May 2017
theres nothing on this side
Avatar erk made an annotation at -149 2774 492 while standing at 64 2831 379 May 2017
this vent goes nowhere after it hits the wall
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at -464 1383 232 while standing at -443 1554 368 May 2017
makes sense here since they're two separate structures. probably dont need this fence
Avatar Albertitoeo left feedback: May 2017
The waste needs to be a little greenier, otherwise, I like it!
Avatar Sierra Foxtrot left feedback: May 2017
Outside area seems really big for KotH.
Avatar erk made an annotation at -743 1275 242 while standing at -736 1131 297 May 2017
maybe make this part of the roof instead of a seperate block?
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at -756 1566 211 while standing at -757 1588 226 May 2017
these aren't two separate buildings so i dont know that you need this gap
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1008 1866 312 while standing at -1229 1744 419 May 2017
this drain is just kind of unnecessary tbh
Avatar Dot Operator made an annotation at -1259 1765 136 while standing at -1255 1762 136 May 2017
error model in the skybox
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
you aren't making a low-res circle, you're making an octagon
Avatar Pocket made an annotation at 1804 3778 303 while standing at 1840 4047 284 May 2017
Why is this winding around like this? There's nothing in the way of it being a single bend
Avatar Muddy made an annotation at 1376 1112 79 while standing at 1158 1205 33 May 2017
might be wrong, but this is a red sign, so it's more suited for red side than blu side
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
the skylight looks kinda odd because it's an octagon but doesn't follow the right angles of the rest of the building
Avatar erk made an annotation at -42 5610 483 while standing at 69 5561 582 May 2017
floating wire
Avatar erk made an annotation at 907 6017 429 while standing at 871 6004 437 May 2017
theres a metal texture that looks really nice on the sides of these roofs. I believe koth_harvest uses them well
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
id just move the fog start closer in and dont worry about seeing a bit of fog in the map - thats normal
Avatar Dot Operator left feedback: May 2017
the radiation effects are very hl1-ish
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
you can see the windows on them and then suddenly the back half is just a silhouette
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
the fog has a pretty harsh transition, especially obvious when you look at the buildings outside the map
Avatar Idolon left feedback: May 2017
(likely in the 3d sky)
Avatar Idolon made an annotation at 2710 6646 520 while standing at 2191 6468 549 May 2017
an error in the distance
Avatar the sneeze of 87 left feedback: May 2017
lighting seems a little flat in places