koth_jetway_a1
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25/0/75 Round Win % (8 rounds) (Click for more information)

Jetway - a1

by JargonJC

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Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 118 -1275 289 while standing at 107 -1275 331 August 2017
I get kind of stuck here
Avatar chin left feedback: August 2017
half the width of the map of mid, really wide
Avatar norfolk left feedback: August 2017
add some of those moving walkway thingys so we can easily get to the point
Avatar norfolk made an annotation at 3057 -139 76 while standing at 3129 -110 116 August 2017
floating crate
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at 577 -215 201 while standing at 2013 -583 228 August 2017
this sight on to the point
Avatar Berry made an annotation at 5 -1303 271 while standing at 107 -1275 324 August 2017
pickups asymmetrical
Avatar Berry left feedback: August 2017
the map feels too large to be koth
Avatar a_sock made an annotation at 3610 -209 118 while standing at 3608 -200 116 August 2017
respawn cabinet refills through this corner
Avatar Xayir made an annotation at -2120 -10 420 while standing at -3105 278 116 August 2017
make lamps non solid
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -993 -177 456 while standing at -1396 -372 228 August 2017
If you look here from the correct angle you can see the point props floating
Avatar Moth left feedback: August 2017
work on lighting, areas are either too dark or too bright
Avatar Aquadango left feedback: August 2017
The CP should have more cover and verticality to break those sniper sightlines
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -2186 -1056 67 while standing at -2188 -1129 116 August 2017
missing textures
Avatar the sneeze of 87 made an annotation at -2752 189 269 while standing at -2959 97 116 August 2017
make these lamps nonsolid
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -2705 -1131 416 while standing at -2697 -1349 308 August 2017
Don't put point_spotlights if there are no lamp props yet
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 1056 -1128 304 while standing at 1295 -1402 518 August 2017
I shouldnt be able to get up here
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -2654 -1380 314 while standing at -2696 -1403 308 August 2017
very unclear glass
Avatar the sneeze of 87 made an annotation at -2685 -1297 257 while standing at -2759 -1338 308 August 2017
this bridge route feels very useless
Avatar ProfHappycat made an annotation at -1932 -1018 97 while standing at -2006 -1107 123 August 2017
UNCLIPPED
Avatar Curlysnail left feedback: August 2017
clip your stairs!
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -1815 -351 390 while standing at -2061 -124 225 August 2017
mega bright
Avatar Aquadango made an annotation at -3128 -420 55 while standing at -3401 -442 113 August 2017
Ammo should be right next to the resupply room
Avatar Berry made an annotation at -3760 24 55 while standing at -4017 1 113 August 2017
spawns start you facing away from doors
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -1741 -665 259 while standing at -1883 -403 228 August 2017
The walls look bad because they don't fit completely, align to bottom & Fit it
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 619 -1615 90 while standing at 675 -1542 116 August 2017
clip stairs
Avatar Berry left feedback: August 2017
the sides of the mid area aren't very focused on the point, i'd direct players towards the CP more
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 733 1564 393 while standing at 583 1544 370 August 2017
Why is this GATE 4 sign here
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -23 1310 -181 while standing at 167 1460 81 August 2017
missing textures here
Avatar FλNGS left feedback: August 2017
cap zone is tiny
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 201 794 616 while standing at 162 807 597 August 2017
missing textures in the window frame
Avatar Curlysnail left feedback: August 2017
spawn resuplys dont work
Avatar the sneeze of 87 left feedback: August 2017
the routes on the right side (for red) are quite far from point
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at 570 415 205 while standing at 1379 -310 228 August 2017
bright af
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 3652 -44 97 while standing at 3653 78 116 August 2017
this doesnt work
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 1239 989 502 while standing at 945 1039 395 August 2017
wall is missing texture
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -848 669 241 while standing at -923 748 245 August 2017
pillars are missing textures
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 3931 796 101 while standing at 3654 695 116 August 2017
dark
Avatar Aquadango left feedback: August 2017
Looks like there are no cubemaps
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 6 161 922 while standing at 15 129 876 August 2017
missing textures
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 24 -73 85 while standing at 93 -151 258 August 2017
missing textures
Avatar Aquadango left feedback: August 2017
Weird lighting might be a leak in your map
Avatar a_sock made an annotation at 298 1224 745 while standing at 608 1226 803 August 2017
you can stand one here!
Avatar FλNGS made an annotation at 1332 -1640 474 while standing at 1309 -1349 116 August 2017
what is glowing in the ceiling
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 2977 -317 206 while standing at 3240 -320 116 August 2017
This patch here looks ugly
Avatar Mr. Burguers left feedback: August 2017
Missing texture
Avatar Crrrrrrystal made an annotation at -2071 -1151 64 while standing at -2071 -1146 62 August 2017
i know its not textured right now, but remember to shorten this so it doesn't cut into the stairs
Avatar one evening 1945 made an annotation at -3 -15 781 while standing at 174 -298 142 August 2017
the beams here are nice and the area is well lit, bit there's a missing texture on the roof
Avatar TheCreeperIV made an annotation at 3804 -165 54 while standing at 4037 99 123 August 2017
I can enter enemy spawns if I go in while the door is open
Avatar Lo-fi Longcat made an annotation at -3623 4 62 while standing at -3617 121 116 August 2017
resupply is broken
Avatar blamo left feedback: August 2017
oh wait scratch that last fb I did, I was just in red spawn despite being blue
Avatar blamo made an annotation at -3585 -753 101 while standing at -3616 -882 113 August 2017
doors got stuck in red spawn as im typing this
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs made an annotation at 2655 -1104 305 while standing at 2650 -1104 308 August 2017
there's a glass texture with lines so that you know it's glass. I think this map could use some of that
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs made an annotation at -4081 -481 143 while standing at -3988 -691 116 August 2017
I, a blu, spawned in red
Avatar one evening 1945 made an annotation at 3519 -592 122 while standing at 3272 -512 165 August 2017
players can get into enemy spawn if the door is open
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs made an annotation at 3052 -208 86 while standing at 3121 -235 116 August 2017
this crate is floating
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2017
nobuild the crates
Avatar Sor made an annotation at 169 -904 262 while standing at 87 -1207 324 August 2017
the fences cannot be shoot through
Avatar Star Bright made an annotation at 656 -348 105 while standing at 615 -351 148 August 2017
zfighting
Avatar Smk made an annotation at 2380 -482 -7 while standing at 2364 -1064 116 August 2017
i think this could be a good connector betwen routes or space for amoo/health kits
Avatar Crrrrrrystal made an annotation at -1800 -1754 60 while standing at -1704 -1863 116 August 2017
from where i am, there is not any ammo close by. This makes it hard to use as engi.
Avatar Star Bright made an annotation at 2193 -480 -119 while standing at 2198 -1064 116 August 2017
lighting implies gameplay space
Avatar Star Bright made an annotation at 3515 102 118 while standing at 3851 106 116 August 2017
why do I spawn facing this if I can't go out it?
Avatar Greg Rock made an annotation at 1064 245 199 while standing at 1138 322 235 August 2017
really really high contrast lighting here again
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs left feedback: August 2017
feels a little overscaled
Avatar Smk made an annotation at -2250 -80 103 while standing at -2366 -94 113 August 2017
try clipping stairs
Avatar TheCreeperIV made an annotation at -378 -1627 128 while standing at -448 -1519 145 August 2017
realy reflective wall
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs made an annotation at 2977 -372 80 while standing at 3140 -350 116 August 2017
why does there need to be an ammopack this close to spawn
Avatar Smk left feedback: August 2017
i spawned in red spawn as blue in another life
Avatar Greg Rock made an annotation at -1420 -1245 339 while standing at -1460 -1108 363 August 2017
due to contrast and reflectivity, this tube is not nearly visible enough. I like the transluscence idea, though in theory.
Avatar Zorb made an annotation at -2842 -146 116 while standing at -2849 -144 113 August 2017
this crate is floating
Avatar Greg Rock left feedback: August 2017
not enough ammo/health distributed in the normal places
Avatar one evening 1945 made an annotation at -2281 -1078 93 while standing at -2284 -1201 113 August 2017
no texture on these tapes
Avatar Greg Rock made an annotation at -115 -1269 282 while standing at 336 -1984 331 August 2017
okay this lighting all around here is horrible. Please tone it down. Contrast is bad.
Avatar one evening 1945 made an annotation at 1159 611 534 while standing at 536 1130 65 August 2017
this entire area is purple and black
Avatar Xayir left feedback: August 2017
lighting is too bright
Avatar one evening 1945 made an annotation at -1817 -279 292 while standing at -2023 -466 225 August 2017
VERY harsh lighting here
Avatar TheCreeperIV left feedback: August 2017
way too much HDR
Avatar Zorb made an annotation at 3712 -1592 187 while standing at 3792 -1791 193 August 2017
Let there be light!
Avatar BigfootBeto left feedback: August 2017
some gameplay signs would be nice
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at 3298 -562 55 while standing at 3419 -293 116 August 2017
no respawn room visualizers
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -1188 -1411 494 while standing at -1150 -1364 521 August 2017
neat
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at -2658 -1185 307 while standing at -2690 -1185 305 August 2017
need more indication this is solid (glass missing?)
Avatar Wingnut | TipoftheHats.org made an annotation at 2033 -1061 84 while standing at 1997 -1128 123 August 2017
tape comes throught the walls here
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -2195 104 151 while standing at -2226 100 180 August 2017
stairs not clipped
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 595 -1695 141 while standing at 619 -1703 180 August 2017
very shin
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 1034 -2 29 while standing at 1055 6 68 August 2017
grabbing this health/ammo traps you in this area and you can be attacked from above and behind
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at 7 -1593 126 while standing at 0 -1671 176 August 2017
you could try making this luggage conveyer bigger to help break up the map
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at -1047 204 453 while standing at -1197 208 363 August 2017
can see ceiling props room over through skylight
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -1159 -1449 114 while standing at -1398 -1398 116 August 2017
youre relying too much on props to cut sightlines here. try something more interesting geometry wise
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -2722 -748 142 while standing at -2817 -697 191 August 2017
kinda useless route imo
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at 1243 753 605 while standing at 366 1242 242 August 2017
broken texture on pillars
Avatar Wingnut | TipoftheHats.org made an annotation at 917 180 459 while standing at 1432 -67 235 August 2017
can see through nodraw at mid from the skylights
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -89 -1357 203 while standing at -201 -1305 116 August 2017
low ceiling
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 277 -897 153 while standing at 301 -1075 116 August 2017
flaoting sprite?
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at 3731 -1490 168 while standing at 3935 -1653 196 August 2017
way too dark
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 31 1147 3 while standing at -621 1177 68 August 2017
this area is kindof a dead end
Avatar Wingnut | TipoftheHats.org made an annotation at -1557 -478 391 while standing at -1536 -714 251 August 2017
there's a hole here
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at 2659 -154 147 while standing at 3837 783 113 August 2017
dark areas on blue side
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at 2240 -872 26 while standing at 2184 -1073 116 August 2017
broken texture on tape
Avatar BigfootBeto left feedback: August 2017
the hp by the point may be too powerful but idk yet
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at -385 -972 274 while standing at -436 -911 324 August 2017
reflection is way too bright and seems off
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -2025 -1048 86 while standing at -2021 -1084 116 August 2017
rope continues into the ground
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at 50 -129 942 while standing at 49 43 123 August 2017
broken texture on ceiling
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 50 858 329 while standing at 122 878 267 August 2017
low ceiling
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at 1237 959 126 while standing at 584 1104 65 August 2017
leak in the world?
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 177 1133 19 while standing at 97 1141 75 August 2017
could use more space here
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 124 1315 278 while standing at -133 1099 75 August 2017
nice
Avatar BigfootBeto left feedback: August 2017
mid is interesting
Avatar Wingnut | TipoftheHats.org made an annotation at -2217 137 82 while standing at -2168 180 93 August 2017
this is a weird thing
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at -3619 -690 112 while standing at -3917 -696 113 August 2017
the map is a bit too open
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -1913 -399 173 while standing at -1869 -263 235 August 2017
super bright
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at -602 54 8 while standing at -818 36 65 August 2017
missing texture
Avatar bluewatermelonexplosion made an annotation at 187 -60 45 while standing at 286 -86 68 August 2017
broken texture
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -2181 5 107 while standing at -2170 72 93 August 2017
woah the bottom peice of the stairs are missing
Avatar Kathen made an annotation at -2675 72 50 while standing at -3431 -68 113 August 2017
lighting seems too bright and distracting