koth_obscurity_a5
30 Comments
 
33/0/67 Round Win % (3 rounds) (Click for more information)

Obscurity

by Unknown

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Avatar Thewtus left feedback: August 2019
put patches under pickups so people know where they spawn
Avatar хле6 NOI left feedback: August 2019
don't put pickups where people are going to be fighting or shooting from
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 770 -1639 -288 while standing at 804 -1612 -282 August 2019
gap here. please take the time to run around your map before testing it to catch obvious stuff like this
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at -695 2480 -307 while standing at -700 2465 -308 August 2019
ammo right in front of spawn only helps spawn campers
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at 670 1872 -173 while standing at 670 1879 -176 August 2019
why let people see into our spawn? that'll only help spawn campers
Avatar yk made an annotation at -927 1524 -343 while standing at -689 1775 -283 August 2019
check the trigger outputs on this door
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2019
can you get rid of the 30 second respawn times
Avatar blamo left feedback: August 2019
I will give this map points for being a fun scout map however
Avatar blamo left feedback: August 2019
maybe use more subtle cover for the point? Or maybe try none at all
Avatar MotherFixxer left feedback: August 2019
Demo is extremely OP for this
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
download a vmf of an official map from the site and look at how things like buildings are constructed
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2019
thats a lot of ground that we cant use
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2019
like half of your displacements are non-walkable
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
the ground is so bright that it's difficult to aim
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 187 -1841 -339 while standing at 121 -1704 -283 August 2019
there is no reason for this door to have a shutter
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
point surrounded by fences isn't very interesting or fun
Avatar MotherFixxer made an annotation at -256 2515 -308 while standing at -256 2752 -308 August 2019
ground seems rather too lumpy and steep in certain areas
Avatar iwishforpie made an annotation at -209 -893 197 while standing at 603 -1206 -171 August 2019
you should not be able to get on roofs
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2019
the point connectors and spawn all feel too small
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at -501 -607 267 while standing at -519 -583 308 August 2019
can stand up here
Avatar Gangrene made an annotation at -564 -2265 -252 while standing at -661 -2381 -315 August 2019
this door's faces are parallel to it's wall, causing artifacts
Avatar erk left feedback: August 2019
this map feels too tight
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
lighting is weird. i would just copy the light_env settings from an official map that has the lighting you're going for
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at 513 -361 -263 while standing at 468 -312 -250 August 2019
these crates are floating
Avatar Doktor Richter made an annotation at -72 2371 -368 while standing at -172 2333 -267 August 2019
put a flat brush just outside spawn so there's even ground for engies to build entry teles
Avatar Gibus Wearing Brony left feedback: August 2019
I love the feel of this map. Very western and rustic
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
put skybox on top of tall buildings so the whole map doesn't render at once
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2019
messy brushwork. try to keep everything on a similar grid size and take the time to line things up
Avatar Gangrene made an annotation at 818 -1428 -316 while standing at 736 -1852 -283 August 2019
this door... is not fully attached
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at 855 -289 -305 while standing at 731 -1987 -283 August 2019
why does this door have a hole in it