pd_artefact_a7
63 Comments
 
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Artefact

by Drolmel Muncher of Souls

Feedback

Avatar Lemur Puncher left feedback: June 2018
the turbine vent hallways need some sort of signage to direct people. It is quite confusing
Avatar blamo left feedback: June 2018
refer to past versions as well
Avatar blamo left feedback: June 2018
I lot of issues still exist so please try to listen to feedback
Avatar erk left feedback: June 2018
red scores for blu??
Avatar [UHG]barracks obimbo left feedback: June 2018
just capped for blue as red???
Avatar Medium Boss left feedback: June 2018
this feels like a random mess of stuff thrown together with no clear end goal, or idea on how it should work together
Avatar Thewtus made an annotation at -637 2658 -203 while standing at -662 2645 -223 June 2018
death pit right outside of spawn
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 402 714 -34 while standing at 460 731 12 June 2018
make this go closed to the wall
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs made an annotation at -554 1846 -56 while standing at -554 2067 -107 June 2018
seems counterproductive to walk up this giant displacement just to drop down
Avatar jeff alfredo left feedback: June 2018
lots of cool ideas here, but they all feel like they've been thrown in at once rather than fitted together
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 504 2593 -157 while standing at 449 2784 -155 June 2018
ignore --->
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 448 2627 -155 while standing at 448 2784 -155 June 2018
make this closer to the wall
Avatar Arenovas made an annotation at -1295 -231 85 while standing at -1698 204 -94 June 2018
You can see the airducts from the drop off points.
Avatar Medium Boss made an annotation at 939 845 -314 while standing at 954 471 -260 June 2018
long and windey while still super tight
Avatar Mr. Burguers left feedback: June 2018
layout is bad, only way to get anywhere is through mid and if its camped its impossible to do anything
Avatar Monoko left feedback: June 2018
please for the love of all that is holy MAKE THIS MAP BIGGER ITS SO CRAMPED AND HARD TO GET AROUND
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at 1260 -455 -101 while standing at 1383 -471 -59 June 2018
doesn't do anything to send me up far enough
Avatar erk made an annotation at 144 -49 16 while standing at 309 -152 75 June 2018
if we cant deposit here why are there markings??
Avatar Ms made an annotation at 639 863 -280 while standing at 504 792 -267 June 2018
this way is just very empty and the layout is plain simple
Avatar Kine² made an annotation at 354 669 -42 while standing at 480 669 12 June 2018
this gap is too small to move through
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1704 -4 -60 while standing at 1694 -6 -52 June 2018
we can deposit here??? it was in the middle at first?
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2018
look at how official maps are structured and try to replicate that. this layout doesn't work at all for tf2
Avatar Mr. Burguers left feedback: June 2018
where is deposit point
Avatar Steve Jobs' cousin Hand Jobs left feedback: June 2018
the map is generally underscaled
Avatar erk left feedback: June 2018
we cant deposit points??????
Avatar joe axe-murderer left feedback: June 2018
entire map very cramped and small
Avatar LuneRune made an annotation at -1245 223 306 while standing at -1289 88 329 June 2018
Can still see through the map from here into the vents/hallways
Avatar joe axe-murderer made an annotation at 706 1880 -158 while standing at 742 1970 -100 June 2018
these two pathways go to the same room
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2018
this layout has an insane amount of narrow maze-like hallways
Avatar Kine² made an annotation at 449 10 -276 while standing at 449 -23 -267 June 2018
you have to be positioned perfectly for this
Avatar Kine² left feedback: June 2018
long halways should be avoided wherever possible
Avatar ZungryWare made an annotation at -558 -651 247 while standing at -821 -743 292 June 2018
Maybe add a bunch of windows, so players know how many alternate paths this map has?
Avatar md made an annotation at -791 746 289 while standing at -792 744 292 June 2018
caught on wall here
Avatar Yeti made an annotation at -1212 132 253 while standing at -1267 -21 260 June 2018
see thru
Avatar Monoko left feedback: June 2018
the middle is way too small, its really hard to push out and if an engie builds a sentry at the top then jump exit is death
Avatar Yeti left feedback: June 2018
very easy to shut down large areas with a sentry
Avatar 144p YouTube Video made an annotation at -862 152 377 while standing at -705 153 431 June 2018
there tiny doorways are annoying to go through
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at -812 2033 -223 while standing at -502 2098 -100 June 2018
either both sides should have this kill pit or neither
Avatar Monoko left feedback: June 2018
Im not sure why we collect beer, maybe something else since this isn't a beer related map?
Avatar 144p YouTube Video left feedback: June 2018
spawn doors are easily spammable
Avatar Yeti left feedback: June 2018
why such a long win length?
Avatar ZungryWare made an annotation at -560 2632 -274 while standing at -421 2887 -155 June 2018
that ramp is a bit annoying. I keep falling into it after I resupply
Avatar ZungryWare made an annotation at -379 2595 -158 while standing at -379 2779 -158 June 2018
I'm pretty far into the game and I still don't know where the dropoff point is
Avatar 14bit left feedback: June 2018
give structure to the fights. (2/2)
Avatar Tumby left feedback: June 2018
please give th emap actual room to breathe
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at -301 2014 -151 while standing at -168 1990 -91 June 2018
might not want to let people able to come this close to their spawns
Avatar 14bit left feedback: June 2018
Consider also having the point open and close like the offical maps as well, so the points build up and (1/2)
Avatar 144p YouTube Video left feedback: June 2018
elevator thing out of tunnels requires that you carefully stand dead center
Avatar 14bit left feedback: June 2018
The layout is far to maze-like, PD tends to be about big arenas and easy to navigate flanks
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at -1043 -661 262 while standing at -1143 -743 299 June 2018
vents feel incredibly dettched from the map itself and unimportant
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at -37 -727 217 while standing at -325 -743 299 June 2018
when I saw that glass I didnt realize there wasnt any on the ground and fell here. Make wall with some glass maybe?
Avatar 144p YouTube Video left feedback: June 2018
air vent tunnels are cool-looking but confusing and too maze-y
Avatar 14bit left feedback: June 2018
Take a look at how both PD maps in the game (Pit of Death and Watergate) and try to figure out what elements work for you
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at -927 -22 202 while standing at -1143 -21 267 June 2018
this doorway is so tiny its insane
Avatar Monoko left feedback: June 2018
map way too cramped
Avatar 14bit left feedback: June 2018
PD level design is mostly based around making spaces that are fun to fight in, and this map doesn't seem to do that.
Avatar Yeti left feedback: June 2018
really hard to push once one team has the point
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at 514 77 28 while standing at 508 103 75 June 2018
keep bonkin head on this part, its way too narrow, make the way in like the funnel shape
Avatar Monoko made an annotation at 564 -12 211 while standing at 744 -130 267 June 2018
light ideas actually super cool but blue light turns red when ammos gone
Avatar ZungryWare left feedback: June 2018
this map feels WAY too cramped overall
Avatar md made an annotation at -265 1619 -59 while standing at -231 1784 -100 June 2018
these pathways are too narrow
Avatar 144p YouTube Video made an annotation at -794 2434 -158 while standing at -807 2647 -155 June 2018
these doors really don't look like doors
Avatar Yeti made an annotation at 546 2030 -153 while standing at 542 1734 96 June 2018
seems kinda easy to spawncamp