pl_atform_s1_a8a
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Atform S1

by Unknown

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Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -1300 -499 -46 while standing at -1455 132 331 June 2022
gotta fill in big flat/empty areas with geometry and cover. i feel like you've made enough maps at this point to know this
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: June 2022
and not all at once
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -1382 406 -50 while standing at -1469 -94 168 June 2022
use displacements to have this go lower down to have height variation. have it gradually get lower throught he area before
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -1631 338 228 while standing at -1818 373 267 June 2022
the arch of this bridge is just high enough to block everything but your head which makes fights super annoying
Avatar Gravidea made an annotation at 1613 -507 -22 while standing at -1484 146 324 June 2022
Absolutely nasty sightline into Blue's spawn for Red.
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -2637 1979 8 while standing at -2733 1728 75 June 2022
blu sniper can watch both red spawn exits from here
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -2093 449 202 while standing at -1865 156 317 June 2022
wall this off
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -2092 1222 258 while standing at -2278 1349 310 June 2022
move the door to here and put a 1-way door on it, with a drop down
Avatar erk left feedback: June 2022
I think most of the map is just two hallways
Avatar erk left feedback: June 2022
this map is too empty and long
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -1185 2000 181 while standing at -1922 1783 308 June 2022
make this all one enclosed area with high cieling
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -1394 1578 128 while standing at -1336 1717 169 June 2022
put a wall connecting here to the side wall and a cieling, leave the bottom open to walk through
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -2325 1651 13 while standing at -2327 1963 141 June 2022
put a rock_5 or something here
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -1995 1425 3 while standing at -1846 1244 75 June 2022
wall this off here but put a ramp for blu to go over
Avatar Gravidea left feedback: June 2022
A little more height variation and cover could really help this map.
Avatar Gravidea left feedback: June 2022
Snipers practically have free range on this map.
Avatar ඞSUSSYඞ left feedback: June 2022
blue does not get enough time to win
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: June 2022
blu can camp red spawn for free once A is taken
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
make it so red has to hold on the ground behind the bridge where they can't see over everything
Avatar ඞSUSSYඞ left feedback: June 2022
red gets a lot of high-ground on the map for free
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
issue is it doesn't break up sightlines since red gets a huge highground overlooking most of the map
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
the bridge on first is a good gameplay setpiece and i can tell you looked at reference for it which is great
Avatar Pwnedbyfatty - PMKBB left feedback: June 2022
I feel like there should be more time or more checkpoints
Avatar MegapiemanPHD left feedback: June 2022
map has a lot of straight lines which is good for sniper but not much else.
Avatar ComicSams left feedback: June 2022
great map! I like
Avatar Frozen Engi left feedback: June 2022
is this a joke
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
last is just a long hallway
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
a red sniper can walk up the ramp outside of spawn and get a sightline to blu spawn
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
i'm glad you reworked it but please take your time and think through your changes more
Avatar Defcon left feedback: June 2022
i think i saw you upload this like a few hours after the last version got tested
Avatar MegapiemanPHD made an annotation at 988 -397 -20 while standing at 960 -320 11 June 2022
aint that a cute lil payload