pl_bastion_a2
38 Comments
 
33/0/67 Round Win % (3 rounds) (Click for more information)

Bastion

by Unknown

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Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
try some variations in texture, everything looks samey
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: 6 hours ago
the last red spawn just being open to spam into isnt the best
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 1470 -2065 1242 while standing at 2687 -2781 1156 6 hours ago
a red sniper would be very anoying there
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
the spiral ramp looks a bit too steep to be 'beleivable,' maybe make it surround an elevator platform blu has to walk up
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 744 -288 94 while standing at 695 -410 104 6 hours ago
z fighting
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at -928 -633 280 while standing at -894 -590 292 6 hours ago
use overlays or props to mark pickup spawns like this
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 315 -1640 145 while standing at 1277 -1665 176 6 hours ago
this room is too long to be right outside spawn
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
Add some classical medieval structures like towers, walls, etc... Or if its not meant to be medieval, maybe german houses.
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at 3787 -2560 1362 while standing at 3923 -2661 1407 6 hours ago
this site route should open up to the track so it helps push up, maybe a bridge that goes over the track.
Avatar walidov made an annotation at 287 1392 -23 while standing at 267 1252 1 6 hours ago
too big and winding to get play but a cave area is neat
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at -221 -2672 900 while standing at 2219 -2844 1077 6 hours ago
long track would rather be more curvy to avoid sightline.
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at -809 -1976 605 while standing at -825 -1940 616 6 hours ago
MAybe these two ramps are too steep?
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 79 146 82 while standing at -371 85 359 6 hours ago
make this stretch like a street market to give cover and mobility options
Avatar walidov made an annotation at 2172 -2648 1145 while standing at 2414 -2777 1160 6 hours ago
i dig this area, would like to see it get more play
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
From C onwards, it bemoces very maze-like, too many routes, red doesn't know how to defend well/blu to reach the payload.
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
A and B play relatively well, i like them.
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at 938 1021 -26 while standing at 3826 564 123 6 hours ago
long sightline, a building in the middle would be good.
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 2989 606 -41 while standing at 3241 609 177 6 hours ago
put a structure here to break flow
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at 4245 1104 107 while standing at 4378 1197 148 6 hours ago
make this side route be higher up and remove some of these walls, that way is like a high ground where Red can defend from
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 3815 682 91 while standing at 4010 497 443 6 hours ago
cut this corner to be a gradual curve
Avatar athena left feedback: 6 hours ago
i dont like blu's and red's first spawns being so close and easily accessible to each other
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
the flank in blu spawn is too thin to be usable if one player is guarding it, and is too strong if no one is
Avatar RLugnut left feedback: 6 hours ago
its possible to get behind the wooden pillars outside first point, make sure to add player clips here
Avatar vermsixsix made an annotation at 1615 -1944 383 while standing at 1600 -1961 395 6 hours ago
love the stairs here for some reason the design of them
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
blu spawn doesnt need to be so big or have an open roof
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
the payload by just moving forward.
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
Add overlays and billboard props as signs for guiding players. But nonetheless players should be able to get to (1/2)
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
dont give blu a 'spam into red spawn' hole
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 6 hours ago
lots of misaligned textures and brushes, make sure snap to grid is on
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 2420 -2082 1239 while standing at 2403 -2276 1212 6 hours ago
this spawn visualizer isnt scaled correctly
Avatar PanKeke left feedback: 6 hours ago
i got tpd after BLU capped C, was no were near spawn
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: 6 hours ago
layout is actually really cool, just massive
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at -585 -845 291 while standing at -551 -922 347 6 hours ago
layout here feels kind of nice
Avatar athena left feedback: 6 hours ago
i feel like a mouse in a cheese maze
Avatar PanKeke made an annotation at 3023 -599 99 while standing at 3023 -599 139 6 hours ago
got stuck here
Avatar athena made an annotation at 4512 -1419 327 while standing at 4610 -1462 380 6 hours ago
this room feels pointless. either make it an alternate exit or remove it
Avatar vermsixsix left feedback: 6 hours ago
huge spawn room
Avatar athena left feedback: 6 hours ago
theme made me think this was medieval mode for a second