pl_dayspring_a6
34 Comments
 
64/0/36 Round Win % (11 rounds) (Click for more information)

Dayspring

by Unknown

Feedback

Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: March 2021
instead of the many static logs hanging from last, have a few logs that move around that you have to frogger across
Avatar The -- Jorolap left feedback: March 2021
way to long sitelines at last
Avatar Defcon left feedback: March 2021
rotate entrances into last so red doesn't get huge sightlines into blu's lobby
Avatar erk made an annotation at -30 -4365 545 while standing at -166 -2262 331 March 2021
this log fades out
Avatar Defcon left feedback: March 2021
make the cart ramp on last wider so you can stand beside the cart without having to jump
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
(and this applies to all classes, not just enemy snipers)
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
players always want control over sightlines. they want to be able to easily predict where enemies can come from. unexpected sightlines ruin that expectation
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
if you have two large areas and only a thin wall between them, you get a lot of shallow sightlines diagonally through the door, which tends to make awkward gameplay
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
In the previous feedback about the flank, I meant from A to B, not B to C.
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
i would strongly advise against using thin wall doorways for major gameplay chokes. use thick doorways to better manage sightlines
Avatar md made an annotation at 543 -456 349 while standing at 816 -583 374 March 2021
a lot of these flanks kind of just cut the corner on the cart path so blu pushes through and the cart just follows upbehind
Avatar Defcon left feedback: March 2021
look at real life sawmills and design spaces that feel like your reference
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
you could even have the saw start out of bounds until the final bit so its less likely to kill red players who aren't expecting it
Avatar Defcon left feedback: March 2021
use reference to inform your layout so you don't just end up making a series of boxes with props in them
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
would probably require a full rework of the point to make the idea work, since its a bit more like cactus canyon where blue doesn't just win instantly
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
keep the saw out of the way until the cart is in its final position, then have it move a decent distance to the cart
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
the saw sucks, it kills you when trying to stop the cart
Avatar RGB left feedback: March 2021
this map feels like im constantly in large pits
Avatar Idolon left feedback: March 2021
ive always wanted to do a payload last in a sawmill with a hightower-esque ending, except you stand on the cart to bring a saw closer to the cart
Avatar norfolk left feedback: March 2021
two full ammo + med hp kits very close at last
Avatar md made an annotation at -316 -1623 410 while standing at 36 -757 475 March 2021
the track section here is all very flat, there's a few little ramps but overall there isn't much variation in height
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
A lot of blue was way ahead of the cart after B.
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
There is a flank that skips entire walk to C from B.
Avatar Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello made an annotation at 1082 481 395 while standing at 988 293 459 March 2021
all these fece props are gates
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: March 2021
there was a log heavy that flanked me while pushing the cart
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: March 2021
the logs at last make wack gameplay
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
Last especially is suffering from 'box with stuff in it', all the entrances are just doorways into a gallery of planks.
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
None of these areas are very interesting to fight in.
Avatar XBOX User left feedback: March 2021
A lot of the areas on this feel like they suffer from just being boxes with some stuff in them.
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -779 -414 526 while standing at -781 -302 580 March 2021
i am trapped in spawn
Avatar md made an annotation at 689 -2933 338 while standing at 703 -2924 360 March 2021
these props have awkward clipping on the ropes, maybe make them nonsolid and make your own, better clip brush
Avatar fluury left feedback: March 2021
fix by teleporting any scrubs in that spawn to the new one
Avatar fluury left feedback: March 2021
red is stuck in gbj
Avatar fluury left feedback: March 2021
door stuck after second