pl_dockyard_a17
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Dockyard

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Avatar Midlou made an annotation at 1547 895 32 while standing at 1562 885 75 February 2019
has a gap in this wall/floor
Avatar nesman made an annotation at 3502 2729 2 while standing at 2586 2627 78 February 2019
errors everywhere
Avatar abp left feedback: February 2019
very easy to spam as demo on defense
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -533 3092 557 while standing at 44 2564 698 February 2019
this alignment seems off.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -150 2061 435 while standing at -175 1986 540 February 2019
these textures don't go in the same direction.
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 2725 4851 117 while standing at 2764 4845 139 February 2019
disable collision on railings like this and clip them
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: February 2019
that corner before 2nd is brutal
Avatar erk made an annotation at -233 1461 19 while standing at -262 1531 68 February 2019
aint packed right, I can go through this
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 3171 4203 71 while standing at 3167 4199 75 February 2019
i'm getting caught on a lot of little edges like this
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2045 5014 -84 while standing at 2009 4992 -23 February 2019
this here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 1477 3559 509 while standing at 1333 3360 658 February 2019
small thing, but this isn't fit properly.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 1532 2592 316 while standing at 1171 3069 569 February 2019
right side has another texture yet the left one is nodrawn.
Avatar MegaPieManPHD made an annotation at 3026 3151 19 while standing at 2990 3226 285 February 2019
seam
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 459 1265 448 while standing at 44 1062 640 February 2019
I'd suggest changing the texture rotation here.
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 1180 5001 -55 while standing at 1354 5010 -52 February 2019
texture repeating on these stairs looks really bad
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 679 -337 -181 while standing at 733 126 -40 February 2019
Make it a bit more obvious you can't go here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 687 749 99 while standing at 1487 1128 126 February 2019
this texture could be broken up more.
Avatar MegaPieManPHD made an annotation at 2637 1469 5 while standing at 2633 1462 9 February 2019
not much room between cart and crate
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 607 326 -24 while standing at -240 518 270 February 2019
this is almost a little too cheeky in my opinion.
Avatar Defcon left feedback: February 2019
you have optimized already optimize it more
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 2252 1868 90 while standing at 2292 1926 98 February 2019
seam
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -270 355 506 while standing at -107 1012 419 February 2019
you can nodraw a lot of stuff in here.
Avatar abp left feedback: February 2019
u gotta optimize this if u havent yet
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 31 1057 325 while standing at 137 1444 334 February 2019
this part of the overhang doesn't really need to exist.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 603 1320 399 while standing at 731 1443 386 February 2019
nodraw/skybox thingy here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 718 2592 216 while standing at 681 2725 258 February 2019
I feel like this thing seems pretty pointless.
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 3158 3458 -3 while standing at 3213 3474 33 February 2019
might want to clip this
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 1343 5132 263 while standing at 1554 5028 257 February 2019
a transition starts here but stops very suddenly.
Avatar MegaPieManPHD made an annotation at 2819 2158 99 while standing at 2808 2065 68 February 2019
change lighting orition of this billboard arrow
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2252 6058 79 while standing at 2950 5973 431 February 2019
a lot of this can technically be cut off earlier.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3293 3722 394 while standing at 2796 3790 400 February 2019
these could probably be a bit thicker.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2251 290 1281 while standing at 2599 6004 417 February 2019
these roofs edges can be nodrawn.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 1916 3224 488 while standing at 1729 3442 365 February 2019
you can see through here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2161 4746 168 while standing at 2150 4744 165 February 2019
these go into the brush when they don't need to.
Avatar md made an annotation at 2505 1556 203 while standing at 2815 1491 115 February 2019
is this wire meant to be clipping through the building to the speakers?
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 768 3810 192 while standing at 591 3494 271 February 2019
I like this transition, but it seems strange to go from horizontal to vertical.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 547 3433 74 while standing at 889 3431 80 February 2019
this isn't connected in any way.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -248 3594 115 while standing at -362 3768 11 February 2019
Lights from nowhere.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -2524 -1244 113 while standing at -92 -1175 90 February 2019
This is a thing.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -847 -641 376 while standing at -717 -593 376 February 2019
Literally unplayable.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -542 -568 394 while standing at -564 -592 399 February 2019
These textures not being fit correctly.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 432 -2529 -64 while standing at -480 -722 313 February 2019
this transition is pretty obvious.
Avatar md made an annotation at 3260 161 25 while standing at 3146 519 1 February 2019
this poor tree >:(
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 745 -2530 252 while standing at -394 -680 313 February 2019
This looks completely (light) blue.
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at 2564 3165 210 while standing at 2638 3122 266 February 2019
how many bloody brushsides on this
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: February 2019
Its almost impossible to defend last
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3416 4408 90 while standing at 3411 4021 104 February 2019
Perhaps move this to where the arrow is.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3850 4118 62 while standing at 3823 4282 180 February 2019
Maybe this should be removed to make it easier to maneuver.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2988 3430 4 while standing at 3385 3727 36 February 2019
this seems cramped.
Avatar Scooby-doo made an annotation at -1474 -1387 -231 while standing at -423 -824 68 February 2019
more errors here
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3824 2168 74 while standing at 3826 2046 95 February 2019
I know this is detailing, but why would you ever put this here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2693 1368 -42 while standing at 2401 955 349 February 2019
I feel like this cover seems very... Specific, I suppose.
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at 1379 2901 140 while standing at 889 3087 341 February 2019
this block should be higher
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at 890 4811 100 while standing at 911 4934 116 February 2019
this one
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at 1939 4672 175 while standing at 2134 4775 287 February 2019
I want to be able to get in here without going through the staircase
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at -1917 1694 33 while standing at -1699 1308 85 February 2019
these are some big planks.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 1778 193 48 while standing at 1658 484 96 February 2019
You can hear teleporters (along with other stuff) through this here wall.
Avatar Scooby-doo made an annotation at 2910 3878 -26 while standing at 2691 3918 70 February 2019
chokepoint too choky for me
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3115 -41 -32 while standing at 3130 -59 20 February 2019
this seems big.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3337 228 40 while standing at 3101 444 19 February 2019
this looks kind of weird, especially with the bright sky, imo.
Avatar MegaPieManPHD made an annotation at 2960 3939 -25 while standing at 2900 3869 51 February 2019
seam here
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 2943 4024 -35 while standing at 2631 3874 77 February 2019
seam
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at -760 2608 214 while standing at -912 2766 206 February 2019
white brick inside here makes little sense when red brick is on the outside
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 2762 3157 53 while standing at 3020 2860 90 February 2019
it's very dark in this general area.
Avatar TheSiphon made an annotation at 3473 2749 64 while standing at 3484 2720 75 February 2019
missing models / unpacked models
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 3859 2979 15 while standing at 3171 2066 68 February 2019
error
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 3491 2988 -20 while standing at 3537 2996 32 February 2019
disp seam
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 3376 2971 -35 while standing at 2468 3068 266 February 2019
i see error