pl_haywire_b48
46 Comments
 
75/0/25 Round Win % (4 rounds) (Click for more information)

Haywire

by Unknown

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Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
please reach out and remake places that are bland or underperforming
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
you aren't going to be able to fix these with the small changes you've been making - take a look at the demos and fix this
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
there's still points which aren't defendable (see: B) and areas which never see any fighting when they should (see: B-C)
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
a lot of this map has remained nearly identical to how it was in early alpha and that's not necessarily good
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
I get a sense you really don't want to have to vastly remake areas of the map - but I sincerely think you need to
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: February 2018
clip the edges of your track wood things so i can walk up them please
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
i want something that grabs my attention - atm the whole map is just samey
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
also yeah there's a distinct lack of any centrepoint or important structure
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 3265 -733 -53 while standing at 3256 -917 21 February 2018
this displacement, again, looks p unnatural
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 2532 316 165 while standing at 2210 74 116 February 2018
make the supports on the walls the same colours as your trims across the WHOLE room, use similar colours
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 2374 433 -60 while standing at 2454 490 -12 February 2018
I don't like these slopes, make them stairs
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 3368 447 -163 while standing at 3504 487 -95 February 2018
again, I think this wood track thing looks rly bad outdoors
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 3911 79 -73 while standing at 4000 -93 -100 February 2018
wood on the outside, concrete on the inside - but not hidden - doesn't make sense in a narrative
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at -549 195 11 while standing at -930 687 27 February 2018
there are a LOT of different wood colours in this room (and many others on the map) consider unifying
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at -903 171 -203 while standing at -754 590 27 February 2018
strange wood slopes
Avatar Diva Dan made an annotation at -1155 -3628 -337 while standing at -350 -2398 17 February 2018
this sewer is cool
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 404 -1858 -6 while standing at 539 -2079 148 February 2018
why does the dirt colour change here? unneccesary
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at -257 -130 -242 while standing at -228 14 -180 February 2018
this is a really really strange aesthetic choice, I don't like how it looks especially outside
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1105 65 251 while standing at 1083 55 258 February 2018
you could open this up with some windows like in badwaters blu spawn
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 262 1417 171 while standing at -25 1189 27 February 2018
a lot of your rooves are way too thick, this is sheet metal not brick metal
Avatar phi ‹no sound› made an annotation at 673 851 -88 while standing at 625 766 -37 February 2018
the way the displacement meets the wood here is p inaccurate to real life and looks very strange
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1507 46 224 while standing at 1531 -87 259 February 2018
this part of spawn is rather tight, feels cramped
Avatar phi ‹no sound› left feedback: February 2018
again, it's a roll until last and then RED just dominates... consider changing up spawn locations and times, somethings off
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| made an annotation at -889 112 -172 while standing at -965 173 -102 February 2018
odd geometry, especially for boards
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1422 -174 352 while standing at 1416 -398 219 February 2018
this roof is really thick
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2432 -2459 171 while standing at 1493 -2459 171 February 2018
this concrete texture looks weird
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: February 2018
because the lighting looks pretty simple and not very interesting
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: February 2018
or using more exterior lighting
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1008 -2805 -522 while standing at -470 -2313 27 February 2018
scale up this water texture
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: February 2018
you should consider changing your ground texture to something brighter
Avatar erk made an annotation at -242 -909 48 while standing at -220 -920 59 February 2018
can see nodraw on this beam
Avatar Burt Burtonburger made an annotation at 3496 -490 -77 while standing at 3856 -958 -59 February 2018
this spot is a way to good sightline
Avatar erk made an annotation at -378 -1091 237 while standing at -355 -1125 59 February 2018
this is a cool detail
Avatar 14bit made an annotation at 3853 -990 -64 while standing at 3864 -999 -63 February 2018
this seems overpowered a bit
Avatar 14bit left feedback: February 2018
getting fram drops in a bunch of places
Avatar erk left feedback: February 2018
the swift water sign at last is dumb, cuz this map isnt swift water at all
Avatar Skittelz Pie made an annotation at 3212 -292 -19 while standing at 3284 -885 20 February 2018
looking at the red bread building destroys my fps
Avatar ghostboy1225 made an annotation at 815 735 -78 while standing at 837 736 -81 February 2018
these cabnets fadeout from the door
Avatar Giva Bo made an annotation at 992 -1517 140 while standing at 888 -1623 196 February 2018
you can stand in the generator outside blu spawn
Avatar Dr. Bum |SCG| left feedback: February 2018
awesome details
Avatar Burt Burtonburger made an annotation at 3206 -1750 550 while standing at 2947 45 20 February 2018
sign up there says swift water
Avatar norfolk terrier made an annotation at 1236 -68 207 while standing at 1246 2 212 February 2018
disable collisions on this prop
Avatar ghostboy1225 made an annotation at 732 -201 132 while standing at 527 -201 132 February 2018
make explosion bgib people on death
Avatar Jumps left feedback: February 2018
walk to last for attackers is a bit long
Avatar JargonJC made an annotation at 3197 174 83 while standing at 2514 1356 263 February 2018
explosion triggers super fast
Avatar JargonJC made an annotation at 895 868 -37 while standing at 782 784 -20 February 2018
make these hills rollback