pl_haywire_b48
46 Comments
 
75/0/25 Round Win % (4 rounds) (Click for more information)

Haywire

by Unknown

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Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
please reach out and remake places that are bland or underperforming
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
you aren't going to be able to fix these with the small changes you've been making - take a look at the demos and fix this
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
there's still points which aren't defendable (see: B) and areas which never see any fighting when they should (see: B-C)
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
a lot of this map has remained nearly identical to how it was in early alpha and that's not necessarily good
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
I get a sense you really don't want to have to vastly remake areas of the map - but I sincerely think you need to
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: 6 days ago
clip the edges of your track wood things so i can walk up them please
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
i want something that grabs my attention - atm the whole map is just samey
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
also yeah there's a distinct lack of any centrepoint or important structure
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 3265 -733 -53 while standing at 3256 -917 21 6 days ago
this displacement, again, looks p unnatural
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 2532 316 165 while standing at 2210 74 116 6 days ago
make the supports on the walls the same colours as your trims across the WHOLE room, use similar colours
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 2374 433 -60 while standing at 2454 490 -12 6 days ago
I don't like these slopes, make them stairs
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 3368 447 -163 while standing at 3504 487 -95 6 days ago
again, I think this wood track thing looks rly bad outdoors
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 3911 79 -73 while standing at 4000 -93 -100 6 days ago
wood on the outside, concrete on the inside - but not hidden - doesn't make sense in a narrative
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at -549 195 11 while standing at -930 687 27 6 days ago
there are a LOT of different wood colours in this room (and many others on the map) consider unifying
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at -903 171 -203 while standing at -754 590 27 6 days ago
strange wood slopes
Avatar Diva Dan made an annotation at -1155 -3628 -337 while standing at -350 -2398 17 6 days ago
this sewer is cool
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 404 -1858 -6 while standing at 539 -2079 148 6 days ago
why does the dirt colour change here? unneccesary
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at -257 -130 -242 while standing at -228 14 -180 6 days ago
this is a really really strange aesthetic choice, I don't like how it looks especially outside
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1105 65 251 while standing at 1083 55 258 6 days ago
you could open this up with some windows like in badwaters blu spawn
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 262 1417 171 while standing at -25 1189 27 6 days ago
a lot of your rooves are way too thick, this is sheet metal not brick metal
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi made an annotation at 673 851 -88 while standing at 625 766 -37 6 days ago
the way the displacement meets the wood here is p inaccurate to real life and looks very strange
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1507 46 224 while standing at 1531 -87 259 6 days ago
this part of spawn is rather tight, feels cramped
Avatar phi phi phi phi phi left feedback: 6 days ago
again, it's a roll until last and then RED just dominates... consider changing up spawn locations and times, somethings off
Avatar Dr. Bump |SCG| made an annotation at -889 112 -172 while standing at -965 173 -102 6 days ago
odd geometry, especially for boards
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1422 -174 352 while standing at 1416 -398 219 6 days ago
this roof is really thick
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2432 -2459 171 while standing at 1493 -2459 171 6 days ago
this concrete texture looks weird
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: 6 days ago
because the lighting looks pretty simple and not very interesting
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: 6 days ago
or using more exterior lighting
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1008 -2805 -522 while standing at -470 -2313 27 6 days ago
scale up this water texture
Avatar Diva Dan left feedback: 6 days ago
you should consider changing your ground texture to something brighter
Avatar erk made an annotation at -242 -909 48 while standing at -220 -920 59 6 days ago
can see nodraw on this beam
Avatar A Chair made an annotation at 3496 -490 -77 while standing at 3856 -958 -59 6 days ago
this spot is a way to good sightline
Avatar erk made an annotation at -378 -1091 237 while standing at -355 -1125 59 6 days ago
this is a cool detail
Avatar 14bit made an annotation at 3853 -990 -64 while standing at 3864 -999 -63 6 days ago
this seems overpowered a bit
Avatar 14bit left feedback: 6 days ago
getting fram drops in a bunch of places
Avatar erk left feedback: 6 days ago
the swift water sign at last is dumb, cuz this map isnt swift water at all
Avatar Skittelz Pie made an annotation at 3212 -292 -19 while standing at 3284 -885 20 6 days ago
looking at the red bread building destroys my fps
Avatar ghostboy1225 made an annotation at 815 735 -78 while standing at 837 736 -81 6 days ago
these cabnets fadeout from the door
Avatar G.bo made an annotation at 992 -1517 140 while standing at 888 -1623 196 6 days ago
you can stand in the generator outside blu spawn
Avatar Dr. Bump |SCG| left feedback: 6 days ago
awesome details
Avatar A Chair made an annotation at 3206 -1750 550 while standing at 2947 45 20 6 days ago
sign up there says swift water
Avatar norfolk terrier made an annotation at 1236 -68 207 while standing at 1246 2 212 6 days ago
disable collisions on this prop
Avatar ghostboy1225 made an annotation at 732 -201 132 while standing at 527 -201 132 1 week ago
make explosion bgib people on death
Avatar Jumps left feedback: 1 week ago
walk to last for attackers is a bit long
Avatar JargonJC made an annotation at 3197 174 83 while standing at 2514 1356 263 1 week ago
explosion triggers super fast
Avatar JargonJC made an annotation at 895 868 -37 while standing at 782 784 -20 1 week ago
make these hills rollback