pl_jinn_b6d
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Jinn - B6D

by abp and 14bit

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Avatar swagGCP made an annotation at 3549 742 -347 while standing at 2849 726 -180 August 2022
most classes are completely unable to get up here which is bad for pushes, especially since medics can't follow
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at -1442 467 685 while standing at -1700 170 811 August 2022
you can stand here
Avatar Twillght made an annotation at 2017 2498 -466 while standing at 794 3037 -14 August 2022
the siteline is too long
Avatar Master Wots made an annotation at -1557 65 810 while standing at -1656 376 804 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar ItsOnlyMilky left feedback: August 2022
why does A go inside halfway through and not at the end?
Avatar MF Lime made an annotation at -1599 43 805 while standing at -1119 318 213 August 2022
glitchy?? spot
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2022
not a fan of how close the A cp is to the roll forward. easy to cheese the cap without breaking red's hold
Avatar swagGCP left feedback: August 2022
i take back what i said, last is TOO defensible for RED.
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2022
nvm i figured it out
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 3558 414 -336 while standing at 2996 -16 -628 August 2022
how do i get up here as the spy class
Avatar swagGCP left feedback: August 2022
last doesn't feel very defensible for RED
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 2893 980 -161 while standing at 2874 971 -123 August 2022
lame nobuild
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at 3444 -1303 -2086 while standing at 3758 -751 -552 August 2022
put more gold in this hole to make it more evident why it's important to destroy
Avatar MF Lime left feedback: August 2022
spawn is beautiful
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at 707 1685 -187 while standing at 111 2146 -162 August 2022
I don't think the cart's supposed to go back up that hill
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at 345 1609 -141 while standing at 183 1968 -95 August 2022
I don't think htat's right
Avatar Pocket left feedback: August 2022
For such a bright sky, there's not a lot of secondary env lighting
Avatar Stickface left feedback: August 2022
the theming is super strong, however once you go inside it's much harder to tell where you are
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at 260 1218 199 while standing at 293 991 78 August 2022
I think the forward spawns are kinda bare bones. Put some decorations in them, like big computers or archeological stuff
Avatar sp_ruce made an annotation at 4372 1472 -481 while standing at 4377 1472 -473 August 2022
i can stand here for some reason?
Avatar Sudrian of Hoenn made an annotation at -1634 49 331 while standing at -2439 111 367 August 2022
why is BLU attacking this pit? put something important in it, like a big laser cannon or something
Avatar sp_ruce made an annotation at 4589 689 -592 while standing at 4583 679 -571 August 2022
add a wall ramp clip here so you don't get stuck
Avatar geegor102 made an annotation at 1255 1166 -129 while standing at 1150 1255 -180 August 2022
weird geo here
Avatar Idolon left feedback: August 2022
i played medic and only saw two teammates at a time, max while pushing b
Avatar sp_ruce left feedback: August 2022
b is too choky
Avatar Idolon left feedback: August 2022
combination of walk times and respawn times and spaghetti routes on B means blue team can simply refuse to play as a team
Avatar MegapiemanPHD left feedback: August 2022
maps pretty good for the most part. Gets a bit messy and choky around B
Avatar geegor102 made an annotation at 2825 1370 488 while standing at 3114 1024 -436 August 2022
that block being cut off doesnt align with the rest of the structure
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at 2300 2169 -214 while standing at 2296 2167 -210 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar chin made an annotation at -887 2065 494 while standing at -755 2268 15 August 2022
this block formation doesnt really look like it'd hold
Avatar geegor102 made an annotation at -968 -913 304 while standing at -976 -917 315 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar chin made an annotation at 449 3432 884 while standing at 359 2731 -4 August 2022
cables holding up lanterns look really thin to me, could maybe be rope textured too, try it out
Avatar punkrocksnepgfΘΔ(she/they/its made an annotation at -1595 241 761 while standing at -1594 202 804 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar geegor102 made an annotation at -2649 240 378 while standing at -2631 231 429 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar sp_ruce made an annotation at -1026 -165 221 while standing at -747 -90 196 August 2022
what chin said
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2022
more water too
Avatar Defcon left feedback: August 2022
more green on last would be good thematic progression
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 1806 2038 582 while standing at 1462 2472 -198 August 2022
make this like the skylight on merc park last
Avatar SirUnknown made an annotation at 1415 1588 -237 while standing at 1430 1678 -180 August 2022
concerned about spawn camping at blu last, since its kinda close to last and only have 1 exit with no windows
Avatar punkrocksnepgfΘΔ(she/they/its made an annotation at -1690 364 764 while standing at -1691 391 804 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar punkrocksnepgfΘΔ(she/they/its made an annotation at -1661 182 756 while standing at -1689 121 804 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 2884 2524 -189 while standing at 2840 935 -180 August 2022
this is a funny sniper spot
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 3886 2146 -658 while standing at 3869 2194 -633 August 2022
decrease lightmap scale on top stair
Avatar BigfootBeto left feedback: August 2022
i just noticed a seam at the bottom of the wall displacements in the final pit
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at -1964 -1346 142 while standing at -1965 -1347 142 August 2022
i would raise this fence since you cant airblast over
Avatar Zeugziumy made an annotation at -1350 -380 196 while standing at -1350 -378 197 August 2022
touching this ressuply causes me to lag when I go backwards, but not the other ressuplies (BLU spawn)
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -1609 -1529 -264 while standing at -1467 -1432 -145 August 2022
clipping is a little aggressive here
Avatar sp_ruce made an annotation at -1277 2 196 while standing at -1288 121 200 August 2022
i can see the repeating texture on the edge of this spawn overlay
Avatar kube left feedback: August 2022
flags are still broken ya buffoon, is it a linux thing?
Avatar kube made an annotation at 1366 973 -172 while standing at 1344 1051 -180 August 2022
portal 1
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 2189 2000 -442 while standing at 2200 2028 -436 August 2022
cringe clipping!!!
Avatar erk made an annotation at 74 628 547 while standing at 75 633 580 August 2022
thanks for not clipping this
Avatar kube made an annotation at -1746 -905 292 while standing at -1816 -913 203 August 2022
kaia thinks this light is too bright/white
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at -2155 -488 252 while standing at -2204 -558 305 August 2022
beam texture rotation is off
Avatar BigfootBeto made an annotation at 73 1820 -182 while standing at 90 1753 -187 August 2022
needs clipping to not get caught under here
Avatar Custard1 made an annotation at 375 -176 31 while standing at 289 -128 75 August 2022
something about this crate makes it not match the background. might be phong or something?
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at -55 2077 -28 while standing at -80 2065 11 August 2022
not shootable cones :(
Avatar Custard1 made an annotation at 1774 4058 -736 while standing at 1899 2957 -428 August 2022
you can probs edit the water vmt to make it lit rather than Unlit. Might look better
Avatar sp_ruce left feedback: August 2022
second that
Avatar BigfootBeto left feedback: August 2022
the detailing is coming along nicely
Avatar sp_ruce made an annotation at 2365 2220 -226 while standing at 2377 2282 -190 August 2022
i think this door should open a little bit faster
Avatar Rijone left feedback: August 2022
i like the graphics
Avatar and brotha, I gift people. made an annotation at 3905 228 -233 while standing at 3914 283 -187 August 2022
last***
Avatar Total Rapscallion left feedback: August 2022
beautiful map tho
Avatar and brotha, I gift people. made an annotation at 3967 452 -243 while standing at 3816 452 -187 August 2022
this entire upper area needs work, it's the main reason why a can be a bitch to push
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 561 2114 432 while standing at 120 1993 -60 August 2022
okay this is beautiful
Avatar Muddy made an annotation at 3584 2204 -422 while standing at 3731 2556 -640 August 2022
who lit this torch and how. very impressive
Avatar Alex.bsp made an annotation at -323 2027 314 while standing at -245 1845 4 August 2022
sew
Avatar The Announcer left feedback: August 2022
apart from A, I think the layout is really confusing
Avatar DaVinchi (brokering) made an annotation at 4704 -44 -303 while standing at 4136 185 -180 August 2022
move the last spawn red resupply down a bit so its harder for engies to camp
Avatar Total Rapscallion made an annotation at 2833 -1370 -100 while standing at 2840 -1383 -47 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Alex.bsp left feedback: August 2022
it is so hard to build a teleport without red destorying it
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 3561 -1828 -878 while standing at 3625 12 4 August 2022
the displacements are really nice
Avatar and brotha, I gift people. left feedback: August 2022
redo red spawn, and forward blu spawn
Avatar Zeugziumy made an annotation at 3765 87 -128 while standing at 3766 98 -132 August 2022
Engi can build here, unsure if intentional.
Avatar 14bit left feedback: August 2022
sentries might be too good on last
Avatar CHICKEN GREMLIN left feedback: August 2022
C is incredibly easy and laidback to defend
Avatar and brotha, I gift people. left feedback: August 2022
it's hard to push through last and easy to spawn camp forward blu spawn
Avatar The Announcer made an annotation at 4054 2908 -633 while standing at 3880 638 -571 August 2022
this sightline is huge
Avatar Succubus Gaming made an annotation at 2201 1711 -443 while standing at 2200 1711 -443 August 2022
clip this
Avatar 14bit left feedback: (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Alex.bsp made an annotation at -1108 -248 227 while standing at -1169 -248 224 August 2022
windows were not invented
Avatar 14bit left feedback: (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Muddy made an annotation at 2395 1516 -456 while standing at 2323 1633 -443 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Tiftid made an annotation at 1409 1422 -247 while standing at 1315 1190 -187 August 2022
why only 1 spawn exit i do not like getting camped by the soldier and demoman classes
Avatar Mr. Burguers made an annotation at -1299 -1096 156 while standing at -1328 -1113 203 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Tiftid made an annotation at -3745 788 445 while standing at -2631 227 422 August 2022
it's pretty obvious how the world just ends past these two dunes
Avatar erk made an annotation at 3070 1546 -82 while standing at 3059 1546 -66 August 2022
sign clips into the pillar
Avatar sz(k) made an annotation at 3733 -655 -833 while standing at 2844 -1335 -59 (Completed - View) August 2022
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 352 955 305 while standing at 171 320 53 August 2022
wooden sign would make more sense than a decal here imo
Avatar chin made an annotation at 2591 1223 -495 while standing at 2936 1217 -308 August 2022
i like this change so no 2nd way up
Avatar erk made an annotation at 4740 -648 -383 while standing at 4705 -649 -382 August 2022
the shine on the glass here is a bit too bright
Avatar Brokkhouse made an annotation at 267 2526 -201 while standing at 312 2613 -179 August 2022
kind of dark here with HDR
Avatar chin made an annotation at -572 -390 152 while standing at -489 -265 207 August 2022
these concrete blocks dont really makes sense, could easily just be brushes textured like the stonework
Avatar erk made an annotation at 3423 -1633 -2168 while standing at 3163 -603 -390 August 2022
the water is pitch black down there, maybe get rid of the water entirely?
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2317 2398 -237 while standing at 2373 2444 -190 August 2022
this area could be more interesting
Avatar SirUnknown made an annotation at 2751 1880 -228 while standing at 2746 1910 -187 August 2022
dark doorway for snipers to hide in
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1638 1204 -144 while standing at 1790 1298 -458 August 2022
let blu drop down through here from their forward spawn
Avatar erk made an annotation at 1498 2581 147 while standing at 1549 2297 -62 August 2022
id get rid of this
Avatar erk made an annotation at 2430 2975 -469 while standing at 2382 2813 -510 August 2022
id probably can this torch, youve got another next to it and a latern right behind it
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1133 3490 142 while standing at 281 3048 -14 August 2022
these rocks look strange poking out of the waterfall area
Avatar erk made an annotation at 709 748 57 while standing at 685 688 92 August 2022
maybe make this sign bigger?
Avatar erk made an annotation at 628 860 273 while standing at 661 551 183 August 2022
honestly id just use the mining crates instead of the frontline ones
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1330 -3062 -126 while standing at -1228 -3145 112 August 2022
maybe put a rock here? might fill in the area more
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1533 -1663 -289 while standing at -1425 -1549 -115 August 2022
tbh a blu variant of this would be very useful for this part of the map and other maps in the future
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1939 -1224 158 while standing at -1918 -1374 427 August 2022
lakeside* not egypt sorry, similar maps
Avatar erk made an annotation at -1802 -989 429 while standing at -1847 -799 431 August 2022
egypt has a hidden switch that in both spawns that could fit well near here'
Avatar erk made an annotation at -3160 1123 454 while standing at -3138 591 775 August 2022
Id probably add some mountains to hide this sudden drop off, would make blu spawn feel more like a canyon
Avatar erk made an annotation at -844 -821 820 while standing at -760 -714 793 August 2022
id probably add some wires and greebs to make this look more like a makeshift radio beacon
Avatar mojowire left feedback: August 2022
like the lighting in blu spawn
Avatar Brokkhouse made an annotation at 4484 -867 -140 while standing at 4554 -535 -372 August 2022
add some dustmotes under this light to make it perfect, see hightower spawn as an example
Avatar LaserDisc_ left feedback: August 2022
great vibes, egypt stuff is great
Avatar Flabby Ball Of Hate left feedback: August 2022
I love the vibe of this map
Avatar Brokkhouse made an annotation at 1135 1959 147 while standing at 1176 1972 152 (Completed - View) August 2022