pl_longhaul
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Longhaul

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Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7845 9669 5130 while standing at 7900 9535 5165 1 week ago
this should be proper stairs
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6819 10004 5295 while standing at 6695 9841 5265 1 week ago
this should probably be pushed in because of the crate being there.
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 7270 8562 5198 while standing at 6583 5922 5411 1 week ago
big boy sightline
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8289 8290 5316 while standing at 8392 8316 5329 1 week ago
Another small thing, but this should probably be covered up so you can't see through this door so early.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 4632 7021 5256 while standing at 4989 6901 5308 1 week ago
(this may be my settings, but) these bushes dont seem to render correctly.
Avatar ZungryWare made an annotation at 7371 7475 4985 while standing at 6725 7582 5370 1 week ago
this whole yard area is very neat to overlook
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6421 7118 5399 while standing at 6622 7104 5405 1 week ago
this door is detailing, but noclipping through it makes it make no sense.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7019 6438 5034 while standing at 6913 6164 5114 1 week ago
add lights of some kidn to this area.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8299 5839 5381 while standing at 7839 5578 5493 1 week ago
I now realise this may be hard to push back, either way you can see this cut offskybox rock.
Avatar //HEI-HIKO left feedback: 1 week ago
blu may use exit on right
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7582 5527 5403 while standing at 7482 5385 5486 1 week ago
(unless this is a prop) you'll never see this, so it should be nodrawn or removed.
Avatar Maid of Heart made an annotation at 5166 5655 5289 while standing at 5122 5643 5292 1 week ago
maybe clip here
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 7843 6043 5455 while standing at 7753 5958 5515 1 week ago
this deck lets sniper see most of blue spawn and even has cover and a source of ammo
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7203 6098 5360 while standing at 7276 6127 5401 1 week ago
texture isn't fit correctly.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6439 6713 5425 while standing at 6414 6766 5415 1 week ago
this wire connects to nothing
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6570 7069 5527 while standing at 6541 6828 5557 1 week ago
this light could probably be less bright.
Avatar ZungryWare made an annotation at 5409 5113 5275 while standing at 5366 4997 5292 1 week ago
this make me think it's a resupply cabinet
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6516 7941 5103 while standing at 6882 7992 5356 1 week ago
I think this should be a full drop, though take that with a grain of salt since I haven't really played the map.
Avatar Maid of Heart made an annotation at 4503 5805 5265 while standing at 4292 5948 5292 1 week ago
maybe put a resupply locker in here
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6107 7787 5223 while standing at 6126 8153 5395 1 week ago
you should either put something here, make it flat perhaps, or make the ramp fill it fully.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5683 9241 5202 while standing at 5660 8790 5280 1 week ago
these planks are also pretty thick.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5427 9148 5272 while standing at 6052 8728 5517 1 week ago
Very safe train station.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6790 9070 5309 while standing at 6145 8702 5528 1 week ago
these are very thick, I think they'd look better if they very slightly thinner.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 6661 7397 5698 while standing at 6963 6443 6204 1 week ago
if this is as high as you can get, there's a lot of skybox stuff that looks weird.
Avatar erk left feedback: 1 week ago
plenty of ammo though
Avatar erk left feedback: 1 week ago
I cant find any health around
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7354 5719 5263 while standing at 7554 5818 5576 1 week ago
I'd recommend to make this a bit wider, probably as close to the staircase as possible.
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 6091 5512 5234 while standing at 5858 5370 5299 1 week ago
what is the point in this area
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7868 5716 5252 while standing at 7278 5779 5476 1 week ago
this extends too long.
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 5270 6097 5318 while standing at 5271 6091 5328 1 week ago
these should be cliped
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8486 8451 5438 while standing at 8918 8514 5449 1 week ago
white paint seems strange, maybe go for red instead.
Avatar AsG_Alligator left feedback: 1 week ago
detailing is neat, other things are less so
Avatar phi [no sound] left feedback: 1 week ago
it does look fine but the layout has serious flaws that need revision
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 11046 9674 5765 while standing at 10761 9407 5780 1 week ago
this is very square.
Avatar i like em big left feedback: 1 week ago
dont let anyone discourage you, your map looks really good
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10434 9845 5583 while standing at 10537 9527 5620 1 week ago
visible seam.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10431 10041 5667 while standing at 10515 9573 5687 1 week ago
this is a bit too edgy.
Avatar schwoopdy doo left feedback: 1 week ago
I don't know if this is optimized, my frames are dropping more than usual.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7950 7097 5235 while standing at 7751 7096 5296 1 week ago
this is a bit too think, maybe cut it down to 8 - 4 units.
Avatar i like em big left feedback: 1 week ago
great job on the spectator cameras
Avatar Defcon left feedback: 1 week ago
i don't need a voice line telling me every time someone touches the cart
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8206 9262 5144 while standing at 8304 9231 5246 1 week ago
this looks... meh.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7997 9848 5602 while standing at 8071 9853 5688 1 week ago
lighting comes through here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7946 10054 5649 while standing at 8280 9865 5671 1 week ago
this shouldn't be see-through.
Avatar i like em big left feedback: 1 week ago
keep up the good work with the detailing!
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8146 8966 5718 while standing at 8448 8977 5819 1 week ago
these materials seem a bit too bright.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10429 7654 5860 while standing at 10634 7790 5951 1 week ago
you never really see this, and when you do you can see the obvious seam.
Avatar Aisé made an annotation at 8174 9151 5134 while standing at 8195 9170 5127 1 week ago
no forward spawn
Avatar i like em big left feedback: 1 week ago
nice skybox + cliff details
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10597 8054 5364 while standing at 10421 8397 5404 1 week ago
some of these shutter doors don't need to be here imo.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10125 9492 5360 while standing at 10243 9462 5378 1 week ago
this is almost invisible, and also way to thick.
Avatar abp left feedback: 1 week ago
like payload in tf2 involves winning/losing territory and the unlocked doors everywhere don't allow that
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 11210 9124 5527 while standing at 10972 9428 5618 1 week ago
door clips through from below when opened.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 11234 9077 5590 while standing at 10865 9437 5624 1 week ago
same here.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 11448 8574 5381 while standing at 11392 8921 5397 1 week ago
somehow make this more obvious of it's existance.
Avatar abp left feedback: 1 week ago
the way that red team (and blue, but it mostly impacts red) can just kinda go wherever always makes the flow real messy
Avatar Boby made an annotation at 5620 5236 5292 while standing at 5620 4996 5292 1 week ago
make reaspawn time for blue 15 s
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 9539 8821 5432 while standing at 9352 8745 5439 1 week ago
this leads nowhere
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 9893 8091 5331 while standing at 9895 8132 5375 1 week ago
why have this landing here? it doesn't make sense and it's easy to get caught on the wooden lip
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 8951 9807 5362 while standing at 9122 8975 5617 1 week ago
this area doesn't do much.
Avatar RanRunDon made an annotation at 10942 10004 5258 while standing at 10954 10036 5277 1 week ago
clip these
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7363 10181 5353 while standing at 7348 10078 5346 1 week ago
if this window is here it would make more sense if it continued into an indoor area.
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: 1 week ago
24 second respawn. Why?
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5191 9120 5343 while standing at 5309 9119 5348 1 week ago
the one window that doesn't exist.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5113 8323 5200 while standing at 5665 8531 5312 1 week ago
this looks copy and pasted.
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 8767 10084 5373 while standing at 8771 10026 5417 1 week ago
why have clipping here? there's already a wall
Avatar Curlysnail left feedback: 1 week ago
The walk is way too long for blue to last
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5660 8433 5211 while standing at 5798 8583 5311 1 week ago
the actualy rails should be made here.
Avatar Daine Mustave made an annotation at 5881 6150 5284 while standing at 5879 6156 5293 1 week ago
this wall needs clipping
Avatar Curlysnail made an annotation at 6597 6866 5316 while standing at 6077 6709 5387 1 week ago
this should be way more obvious for blue to use
Avatar erk left feedback: 1 week ago
why does blu have to walk so far to the cart
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7909 6538 5250 while standing at 7853 6608 5357 1 week ago
harsh texture transition.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 7841 7088 5070 while standing at 7689 7091 5294 1 week ago
this shouldn't be clipping imo
Avatar abp left feedback: 1 week ago
why can red just go to A point whenever they want!!?
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 4087 6057 5306 while standing at 4389 5813 5316 1 week ago
odd architecture in my opinion.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5090 7012 5286 while standing at 5181 6976 5320 1 week ago
clipping.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5415 6154 5351 while standing at 5661 6652 5448 1 week ago
replace one of these.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5784 5453 5265 while standing at 6222 5882 5416 1 week ago
maybe make it a spawn door instead.
Avatar //HEI-HIKO made an annotation at 6882 9028 5102 while standing at 8351 9330 5199 1 week ago
bloom inside is a tad too high
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 5933 5325 5237 while standing at 6326 5948 5433 1 week ago
this side area seems pointless.
Avatar DrSquishy made an annotation at 7951 8706 5283 while standing at 8184 6771 5299 1 week ago
lawd the sightline
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 9153 7339 5235 while standing at 8911 7870 5302 1 week ago
not much reason to go here for just a medium ammo.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10152 8138 5611 while standing at 10359 8307 5746 1 week ago
this looks strange without a roof.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10814 7778 5327 while standing at 10876 7699 5379 1 week ago
reflection here.
Avatar //HEI-HIKO left feedback: 1 week ago
missing texture under railway
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 9813 9124 5146 while standing at 9735 9308 5369 1 week ago
this reflection is missing textured as well.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10716 9118 5328 while standing at 10761 9240 5417 1 week ago
all glass seems to have missing texture reflections.
Avatar schwoopdy doo made an annotation at 10745 10027 5439 while standing at 10775 9900 5453 1 week ago
these windows are purple.
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 7320 8429 4998 while standing at 7126 8077 5036 1 week ago
why does this open sideways
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: 1 week ago
no there are not cubemaps
Avatar abp left feedback: 1 week ago
give this map an env_tonemap for the HDR players
Avatar Defcon made an annotation at 10499 8563 5314 while standing at 9716 8554 5377 1 week ago
need to build hdr cubemaps
Avatar AsG_Alligator made an annotation at 10644 8910 5331 while standing at 10647 8806 5380 1 week ago
clip this frame
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: 1 week ago
are there cubemaps?
Avatar MegaPieManPHD left feedback: 1 week ago
really really bright
Avatar DrSquishy left feedback: 1 week ago
make sure to use a version string on your file next time or it can't be tested (_a1, _a2, _b5, etc)