Diagnosis

26 Comments

100/0/0 Round Win % (3 rounds) (Click for more information)

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Game Mode: Capture Points
Allowing Feedback: Yes
Thread: Unknown
Last Seen: 9 hours ago on 0.0.0.0:27015 — View Demos

Feedback

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

find reference for your setting and build spaces based on that. try to make a space that you would be excited to play in

Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 9 hours ago

A to B is a bit far, with oversized views

Padre Snowmizzle left feedback: 9 hours ago

From the bit I played these highground roofs are a bit much for BLU to tackle without any height of their own

Habber The Quesomancer made an annotation at -333 130 264 while standing at -348 149 295 9 hours ago

these rooves are very strong high round that make B quite hard to attack I think

rbstat left feedback: 9 hours ago

overall2: aside from that the layout is mostly fine aside from some chokes near second and just being kinda uninspired!!!

Don Donovan "The Don" Donatello left feedback: 9 hours ago

i think A may be a bit too hard for red because of all the angles blu has to spam it

P53 Enfield made an annotation at 250 -46 18 while standing at -405 508 91 9 hours ago

red can spam blu off the point from here with very little blu and do about it

rbstat left feedback: 9 hours ago

overall: I think B is just too hard to cap, that area is pretty massive and empty and open so there's lots to change...

Yaki left feedback: 9 hours ago

second point: probably enclose it with the roof, instead of two separate roofs on either side

VenomousViperKin left feedback: 9 hours ago

Courtyards (those long open areas from cover to the point) should be shortened for faster gameplay

P53 Enfield left feedback: 9 hours ago

its suicide for blu to stand on the second point

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

lets red defend without leaving spawn and forces blu to spawn camp in order to win

Defcon made an annotation at -1546 2698 96 while standing at -1560 2693 107 9 hours ago

red spawn exits should never have direct line of sight to the point or other important areas

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

it's okay for maps to have sightlines. I generally don't think sniper is a problem here, if anything it feels too segmented

Defcon made an annotation at 639 -615 12 while standing at 743 -944 59 9 hours ago

easy for red to go the wrong way out of spawn

VenomousViperKin left feedback: 9 hours ago

Map got some sightlines

VenomousViperKin left feedback: 9 hours ago

It is unrealistic for red to push blu back to A after it has been capped, but it happened anyway

Defcon made an annotation at -2717 2244 16 while standing at -2383 2192 11 9 hours ago

awkward sightline. snipers can see blu's feet before blu can see them

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

theme*

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

rather than just making a bunch of them agnostic abstract boxes and figuring out the setting later

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

nothing about the layout really gives me a sense of the setting. ideally your map's setting should be baked into the layout

Defcon left feedback: 9 hours ago

most of these spaces are essentially boxes and hallways. would appreciate some more distinctive layout shapes and landmarks

rbstat left feedback: 9 hours ago

you mightve actually made the cap times a lil too LONG this time!!! Oops :3

mineboyben made an annotation at -1088 2217 64 while standing at -1076 2329 91 9 hours ago

maybe just close this door after the point is capped instead of making it an easy way to spawncamp red team

Defcon made an annotation at -2419 83 5 while standing at -2399 1527 11 9 hours ago

chickenwire is almost invisible at this distance. fences like this need boards or other opaque surfaces breaking them up

Defcon made an annotation at -2513 1939 -56 while standing at -2395 2183 4 9 hours ago

design blu's first spawn so the exits don't have line of sight to the spawn points